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Old 03-23-2010, 11:18 PM
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Chemical Gun

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Old 03-23-2010, 11:42 PM
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Old 03-24-2010, 12:55 AM
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Old 03-24-2010, 04:16 AM
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Your shading needs to be a bit cleaner, with a greater variety of colours. I don't like the outline or the shape either, but the
concept is cool. Try making the little green things more interesting. Also, Zone is kinda a dark, shiny coloured game. Keep that
in mind next time you try :]. Oh, and watch the porportions, and think about your character holding it. Is it a rifle? If so, where
do you put your hand? How does it shoot with no trigger? What does it shoot? Can it be Dual Wielded?
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Old 03-24-2010, 01:59 PM
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I love it
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Old 03-24-2010, 05:41 PM
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Could be better, it doesn't seem to really have a light source.
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Old 03-25-2010, 02:48 AM
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You know buddy, I could fix that gun up and show you what I mean if you'd be so kind as to give me an A'OK :]
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Old 03-25-2010, 04:18 AM
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Gradient isn't shading.
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Old 03-26-2010, 03:46 AM
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It could be better

-the outline is pretty basic
-the shading is somewhat akward, you should be working with a lightsource when pixeling

I highly recommand
- a new outline where you can see the different parts of the gun
- a light source comming from the top, like all other zone weapons
- no pillow shadowing unless you plan on giving the gun a certain shape.
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Old 04-04-2010, 10:52 PM
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ewww this is sooo plain no one would use this garbage
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ewww this is sooo plain no one would use this garbage
Go make more threads about how you're the best.
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