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Old 05-31-2012, 03:40 AM
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here is a era level i made

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Old 05-31-2012, 04:14 AM
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Looking good for a modern level, modern tilesets aren't the easiest to work with.

From what I can see you're on the right track, you just need to work on your walls and try to make it look a lot more realistic. Try to not make the surrounding walls so wide, and also make them even width all the way around.

I also think you need to focus on making your flooring a little more exotic and not so predictable. There is nothing wrong with the tiles you used, but just practice different patterns and styles.

Below one of my levels I created with a modern tileset, I never got the chance to finish it but maybe you can get a little idea on different ways you can make an inside.

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Old 06-09-2012, 09:04 PM
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Thanks for the feedback
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Old 06-09-2012, 09:33 PM
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i think the back wall should be taller
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Old 06-18-2012, 03:23 PM
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You guys rock im trying to improve i think im just rushing like tricxta said i'm gonna take a little more time to add detail an not post til my levels are done.
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Old 06-19-2012, 01:18 AM
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Why did you ignore everybody's criticism in the last thread???

You should be glad people are wasting their valuable time to help you. It won't happen again.
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Old 06-19-2012, 01:52 AM
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I didn't ignore it i didn't think the level was worth fixing.
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Old 06-19-2012, 10:22 AM
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You guys rock im trying to improve i think im just rushing like tricxta said i'm gonna take a little more time to add detail an not post til my levels are done.
they rock cause they gave you good feedback, why didn't you ever tell any of us on the last thread we liked?

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Old 06-19-2012, 11:11 AM
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they rock cause they gave you good feedback, why didn't you ever tell any of us on the last thread we liked?

You will NEVER be a LAT ever.
Even if he refuses to take time and rejects everyone advice let him have his fun, he's probably just some uber troll, feed that fire!
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