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Old 09-25-2011, 05:45 AM
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Era level feedback.

I made a level just wanted some help to help me improve. Also for the second one what should be added to the deck?
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Old 09-25-2011, 05:48 AM
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Looks pretty beast, better than most of the leveling on Era
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Old 09-25-2011, 09:34 AM
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In both those levels you have spammed npcs way too close together, so both levels don't look so good. In the second level Im having a hard time distinguishing between the walls and what not.
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Old 09-25-2011, 11:33 AM
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They all look a bit too cluttered and the first level is so boring (despite the spammed npc's), because it looks too square.
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Old 09-26-2011, 04:02 AM
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I'm no expert, but what good is a room with no door(referring to your first one)? Otherwise I kinda like the first one even though all the guns and etc are npcs (might slow you down a bit). The second does seem cluttered and hard to differentiate from blocking/non-blicking tile.
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Old 09-26-2011, 05:36 PM
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i like the first level. i dislike the backwards couch. whoever made it. no no no no nono.
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Thanks for the feedback. I worked on both and have made changes also the first room is upstairs so that's why there is no door.
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