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Old 09-15-2005, 06:57 PM
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Help.

I was tiling a level for a guild I'm in, and this is the outside level I started (hence, not finished). I don't know what it is, but everytime I look at it, it makes me cring. Any pointers?
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Old 09-15-2005, 07:51 PM
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Meh, I dont like that kind of cliff layering, I like it when they merge into one instead of being divided. Also, its not round ish enough for my liking.

The beach looks too bubbly and diagnol.

Apart from that I think its alright.
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Old 09-15-2005, 09:03 PM
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Cliff outline is cool in my eyes, Im not sure if this is going to be multiple levels connected but if its not I think the tree setup is lame 4 some reason 2me. I really do hate when people do beaches like that cause its so fugly. But other than that I think if could turn out cool.
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Old 09-15-2005, 09:55 PM
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Trees up at the top, make the space wider.
Make the beach 'dark' tiles smaller, they look odd.
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Old 09-16-2005, 08:11 AM
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I like the level. I love how you've used an path tile to merge with the shadow tiles, very creative!

I don't see anything wrong with the level.

Everyone makes levels they dislike. I remember making one and I didn't like it, so I sent it too Crono too finish. The level I did, I tried something different from what I currently do, maybe that's why you don't like it?
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Old 09-21-2005, 05:55 PM
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I like the level. I agree the shore looks to bubblish.. but thats the tiles fault I guess. I don't like how the waterfall comes out of a roofing tile on the cliff though, draws attention to the level and it's oddness. Other wise, nice level.
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