Comment/Rate Level or two

[Crono]

This was originally for Malinko's suprise birthday. It was rushed and then at 10pm i realized that I couldnt finish it for 12 am so meh, this is what I got so far. Rate the beach to water and grass to dirt please.

I would also appreciate it if you level pros would help me fix the tile errors.



Note- It's NOT finished. This is only the outline.

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Lookin good so far man, lol. Add some deep water into the pool, obviously. With the waterfall, shorten the stream on the righthand to make the bottom of it the same length as the lefthand stream.

[Crono]

Update, havnt started adding content or trees.

[Mykel]

The waterfall is much wider than the start of the deep water. Not sure if that is a tile-error or not, it just bothers me.

[Crono]

Err what?

(ten words, ten words...)

[haunter]

The water fall is wrong. the two tiles at the top go at the bottom... You stick them right before the ones you currently have at the bottom.

There are 'waterfall starting' tiles there somewhere. Look on the preset waterfall in the editor.

[Crono]

There, hope this is right

[Mykel]

Me gusta.

[haunter]

Good good. Just a picky thing... Something you would do after you've finished the entire level... But I suggest putting water instead of blackness in the cave hole, then putting a shadow effect coming out of the cave.

[Crono]

Originally Posted by haunter

Good good. Just a picky thing... Something you would do after you've finished the entire level... But I suggest putting water instead of blackness in the cave hole, then putting a shadow effect coming out of the cave.

You mean put water instead of the blackness then get a light effect, make it black, then place it on the water to make it look all shecksay?

[haunter]

Uhm... Sure?

[Crono]

Originally Posted by haunter

Uhm... Sure?

What? I wasn't sure what you meant

[Crono]

-Double-

Shadowless, kind of like this? I suck with scripting w00ters

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by Gerami

What? I wasn't sure what you meant

I think you should do a triple sideways slam on your mouse, throw it through a hoop, then put the northwest section of the signpost all over the level in the pattern of a fish

[haunter]

Originally Posted by Gerami

-Double-

Shadowless, kind of like this? I suck with scripting w00ters

Ya looks fine.

[Crono]

Updated a bit

Yes the water shadow is still there but doesnt show up on a full level screenshot. This level was uploaded to #gscript so I added those chairs and I usually hangout there with some of the other #gscripters. Still finishing :/