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Old 08-03-2003, 04:49 AM
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My Level!

Here is one of my levels I made earlier today this is my first level I have posted that was made by me so... gimme some input.

Rate from 1 to 10 1= lowest 10 = highest

If you don't like it give me some pointers on how I can get better.

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Old 08-03-2003, 08:47 AM
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I would fix all the tile errors (water not connecting right, bushes in trees) and I would have it so that fences were meaningful. I don't know who would go through the effort of putting up fences in the middle of nowhere like that really. Maybe you could put houses there too, which would give more activity on the level. I don't care for your house, but I don't take off marks for stuff like that because it's all a matter of preference.
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Old 08-03-2003, 10:38 AM
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I would fix all the tile errors (water not connecting right, bushes in trees) and I would have it so that fences were meaningful. I don't know who would go through the effort of putting up fences in the middle of nowhere like that really. Maybe you could put houses there too, which would give more activity on the level. I don't care for your house, but I don't take off marks for stuff like that because it's all a matter of preference.
Ouch...

[edit] I guess I gotta get out of the level making ice age and start making my levels more up to date I dunno, I guess this level might have been good maybe.... 1 year ago atleast higher then a 2 [/edit]
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Old 08-03-2003, 11:01 AM
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Ouch...

[edit] I guess I gotta get out of the level making ice age and start making my levels more up to date I dunno[/edit]
or try making levels without tile errors
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Old 08-03-2003, 12:37 PM
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lol, that level has alot of tile errors, o-well nice try 5/10 Goodjob, paradox try helping neo (But i think you dislike him?.), Anywho try to.. You work on the same server
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Old 08-03-2003, 03:55 PM
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or try making levels without tile errors
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Old 08-03-2003, 04:08 PM
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ugh, the level design is good, but it's full of tileerros dude... ._.
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Old 08-03-2003, 06:05 PM
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I would give it a 5/10, just fix up the tile errors. Also has shaun said the fence posts just seem kinda out of place.
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Old 08-03-2003, 08:51 PM
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or try making levels without tile errors
Nah, we are good friends he is just being a weirdo!
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Old 08-03-2003, 08:57 PM
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Nah, we are good friends he is just being a weirdo!
Negetive, he said to me that he hated u and wanted u to committ suicide =-o! uh-oh.
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Old 08-03-2003, 09:02 PM
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Negetive, he said to me that he hated u and wanted u to committ suicide =-o! uh-oh.

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Negetive, he said to me that he hated u and wanted u to committ suicide =-o! uh-oh.
lol wtf


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but for real nj i'd give the level a 5/10 considering you don't make levels much....you just gotta take your time and watch the tile errors....
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Old 08-03-2003, 11:43 PM
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When you have done a level, look through for tile error's works for me sometimes
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Old 08-04-2003, 12:49 AM
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It's good except for the trees....when they are linked together horizontally it's kind of....blarg.
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