rate my first level

[TDK_RC6]

rate it please

[TDK_RC6]

and no i didnot do this on purpose im just dumb -.O

here is the pic

[Yushiwa]

4/10

Nice house design, the path is too plain and the whole level is too plain. Add alot more tiles and stuff to the grass, some trees, bushes, ect.

[TDK_RC6]

here i fixed some of the level up to make it look better

[Aliendude]

The dirt looks very plain. Maybe you could add some grass or rocks into it. Plus alot of the grass edges look too straight.

5/10

[SinNetherwind]

better then my 1st level was, but its still bland. keep at it, youll get better. 7/10 fer effort

[TDK_RC6]

rate this i fixed it again for the 3rd time??

tell me what else i need to do

[haunter]

Originally posted by TDK_RC6
rate this i fixed it again for the 3rd time??

tell me what else i need to do

Clump. Your. Detail.

[MysticZhadow]

Kojiro: This is good for a begginer I remember when I got into levels and couldnt bearly make an inside or outside and dinit know how to link X.x but for effort i give 6/10 keep building man!!

[Aliendude]

It still needs lots of detail. Add in some rocks to the dirt or more clumps of grass. Like the others said, that is good for a begginer =)

[darkriders_p2p]

Originally posted by TDK_RC6
and no i didnot do this on purpose im just dumb -.O

next time you could delete the double post and edit your first one.
But the first screenie I see, is pretty bad, but the house is nice
5/10
for your second shot I am gunna lower the rating, #1 you used a predefined lamp, make the base of the lamp, then take an NPC and make its img bluelampani.png and then for script:

NPC Code:

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if (playerenters) dontblock;

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And the second reason, you used backpal instead of seteffect -_-
use this:

NPC Code:

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seteffect 0,0,0,.3;

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for about the same effect.Rating 4/10
And for your last screenie, I'll give it 7/10, its better.Remove the dirt holes in the top corner.And make more detail closer together

[zell12]

its better than most of the other things on here
but The only thing I see wrong is that there is no detail, and the dirt path is too big... I don't think people would walk all the way around that to get to that house... put some mroe grass clumps and flowers in there 3/10

[TDK_RC6]

ok i fixed the level again ^_^

[Aliendude]

It looks better every time you post it, but there are still some very plain areas.


Red: Too plain
Blue: Something I don't like about this area, but I'm not sure what x.x

[zell12]

you really need to shorten up on the dirt... Post the level and let the pro's fix it up so you cn see what we are talking about

[nyghtGT]

The term less is more applies to your dirt/sand usage...

[TDK_RC6]

k here it is i also did a few more changes

[SinNetherwind]

Originally posted by haunter


Clump. Your. Detail.

[WHIPENIE4]

(X-Mann)
you just gave everyone your level........

[TDK_RC6]

so?????


im only building levels so i can learn how to make them not so i can collect them and build a sever or something