My newest level

[SingleChance]

this morning i started on a level and i just finished it about 4 hours later lol and well i know im probably gonna get bashed for making another level like this, but i think they are kool and this is my first try at it so can u guys please rate it and tell me what u think?...also, suggestions on how to improve it are welcome

thanx

[Spark910]

Very Nice 10/10!
Lots of levels like this but still vry good.

[haunter]

Originally posted by SingleChance
this morning i started on a level and i just finished it about 4 hours later lol and well i know im probably gonna get bashed for making another level like this, but i think they are kool and this is my first try at it so can u guys please rate it and tell me what u think?...also, suggestions on how to improve it are welcome

thanx

Its good... but too many of those tiny grass clumps (the 4 tile ones) in the shallow water... and too many 1-tile rocks, tose green ones, and those 1-tile grass holes, both the holes and the rocks aren't very nice tiles...

[Slaktmaster]

You did very good, I really like it. However, one thing about it bugs me, there are a lot of tile errors at the top of the cliffs. But they are very small so they are barely noticable.

[Waltz5]

This has become a very popular design now, but it looks great.
I do agree, too many of the 4 tiled grass in the water. And there are tile errors, but as Archaon already pointed out, they're barely noticeable. Also too many of the little holes tile (hard to explain lol).
These are just little things, but once again, great level.

9.8/10

[Psyker]

Somebody's used Gori's tutorial!

[Slaktmaster]

Originally posted by Psyker
Somebody's used Gori's tutorial!

no posibel!

[Spark910]

Originally posted by Psyker
Somebody's used Gori's tutorial!

Where is the Tutorial?

[Faheria_LAT3]

mmmmkay: Fairly well designed level, on top of the criticism from others, I will add that I dislike the switch between grass and desert so much...in a desert do you see clumps of green grass everywhere?

[haunter]

Originally posted by Faheria_LAT3
mmmmkay: Fairly well designed level, on top of the criticism from others, I will add that I dislike the switch between grass and desert so much...in a desert do you see clumps of green grass everywhere?

Well if it is a desert, it's an oasis thing, cuz there is a river, but up on the cliffs there would be fewer green grass things, since Water dun flow uphill ;P

[darkriders_p2p]

Originally posted by Faheria_LAT3
in a desert do you see clumps of green grass everywhere? [/B]

I see clumps of green grass in my yard, its like a desert.

[magicbud3344]

where the tutorials

[GrappaRoo]

Decent.

[osrs]

Not bad
To be best,add some designs..