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Old 01-15-2002, 07:47 AM
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Is this any good?

If you don't think it is good maybe lemme know how I can improve on it
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Old 01-15-2002, 07:49 AM
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Old 01-15-2002, 07:54 AM
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why is it bad, or should i just not try to save it
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Old 01-15-2002, 08:11 AM
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VERY little datail... try putting trees... bushes... rivers... swamp etc
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Old 01-15-2002, 08:13 AM
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The level is very bad.
You are lacking many parts to an outside level.
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Old 01-15-2002, 08:27 AM
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Re: Is this any good?

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If you don't think it is good maybe lemme know how I can improve on it
Why is part of that water white?
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Old 01-15-2002, 08:37 AM
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transparency or something i guess, ok ill try adding more detail or something or maybe i should just stop trying to make levels
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Old 01-15-2002, 08:42 AM
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i should just stop trying to make levels
keep on.
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Old 01-15-2002, 09:06 AM
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Old 01-15-2002, 10:45 AM
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Very very little detail, lacks everything of a good outside level
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Old 01-15-2002, 01:02 PM
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its a nice start. like the others so harshly mentioned, you need a little more detail. but as a start that level isn't lookin too bad. it shows that you were at least trying to make a complicated level with different heights and stuff like that... the grass tiles aren't too boring, but need more diversity. you need to add maybe a river that goes from the top left of the screen to the water part down in the lower right that maybe goes into a waterfall and goes down?
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Old 01-15-2002, 07:35 PM
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Old 01-15-2002, 08:28 PM
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transparency or something i guess, ok ill try adding more detail or something or maybe i should just stop trying to make levels
If it is one of your first levels I say it is good. You could practice a bit with the tiles. It looks a bit to straight and a bit to few tiles. But I´m sure you can improve that ^_^

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