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Old 04-24-2001, 08:09 AM
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Heres another story after I got a good response from the last one...

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The Fairy Princess - Zorro

Once apon a time... a long, long time ago. There lived an old man who would work and work and work. In the morning he would get up and firstly feed his animals then he would feed his family, and then would continue for the rest of the day on the field collecting various materials from the animals and farming his land. If that wasnt enough in the evening he would have to cook for his family and then just before he went to sleep he would sit down for half an hour to build his little model cruiser with matchsticks. This model of his was his pride and joy. He spent over 278 hours working on it over time.

One evening an evil devil came snooping through the house of the old man looking for some nice food to eat, which was unlike hells gruel. With handfuls of rice and a loaf of fresh bread he held he decided to leave, however, on his way out he noticed the old mans beautiful wooden ship he had been making and laughed. "That reminds me of the vikings ships I used to destroy" remembering his passed he thought again and stole the model. At that moment the old man woke up to the sight of the devil and shouted out for him to stop. The devil jumped and dropped the stolen model ship smashing it into the thousands of pieces it started in.

The next day the old man with tears in his eyes began to rebuild what he had treasured and lost, two days passed and the old man was in dispair because he had hardly progressed then he heared a knock at the door. Thinking it was the devil returning he grabbed a knife and opened the door. To his releif however a beautiful fairy princess stood at the door with her wand. She waved it three times and then told the old man to look behing him. He turned and sitting there on the floor was a sight to make his heart beat. His model was repaired and was made of golden matchsticks instead of the old ones the old man had used.

The old man was overjoyed and thanked the fairy princess with his heart, and they all lived happily ever after.

The End :) - Copyright Krakken 2001 (c)

(This story is based on a true story which happened to Krakken... Someone hacked his account reset it... he lost everything and has only just started his rebuilding)

There we are... and this one is copyrighted, bwahahahahaha to hawk :P
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:12 AM
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heh

that's a nice story.
But you didnt have to copyright it!
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:21 AM
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Pretty nice story! :P
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:21 AM
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:23 AM
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heh

Anytime, but you should make a REAL book, and then at the front put, "And thanks to the encouragement of Derrick (Hawk)"
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:24 AM
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Lolz maybe I will :P
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:25 AM
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because if you DID put that, then the book would sell like millions of copies !
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:25 AM
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Hehe.. I could just put all my little life/graal stories into a big book of loads... like a diary :P
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Old 04-24-2001, 08:27 AM
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yes, that would be a very good idea
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Hehe... i'll include you in my next story :P
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Hehe... come on... pleae post what you think :/
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Er..Owns. Yuo should make a book like Hawk said.
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youknow if you didnt have those character names at the top this would be a lot like the secret newspapers in WWII and The Revolutionary War when they coded everything in fairy tales and stuff like "Once upon a time, there was an evil warlock that ruled a poor village and the people in the village would not care for his rabbit because it was so costly. The evil warlock made them care for the rabbit because he cast a spell upon the village in which they could not leave to get food until the rabbit was fed and groomed..."
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Old 04-24-2001, 11:04 PM
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Hehe... Women have that "effect" though dont you think...
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I R Liking it!! (Maybe you could mention me in ur book, even in like font 1 on the back page or something i wouldn't care )
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Pretty nice story! :P
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I laughed out real hard when I saw that ^_~
lol me too
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Smile Thanks :)

*cries* aaaaw your all so kind *cries more*
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Zorro - *sings* "Man I feal like a woman.. da,da,da,da,da.. da.. da"

Hmmmm... *thinks*.....*stops thinking* man... where should I go to get publishing stuff? Im not very rich so I could only have about £20 ($30) Hmmmmm....
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