"A High School Tail" with the redesigned Shawn Fox

[Butz]

Ok, here's a preview of my comic strip I'm hopefully doing for my school newspaper...(If not, it may become a *dramatic pause* webcomic!!).. anyway.. I wan't to know what you think...
It's the first one with the improved character in it..
Just a bit of background on it..
The main character's name is Shawn Fox, he has recently moved away from his old school "Pine Forest High School" to a new school with only Human students...(Roughly based on MY school...) Anyway, since the budget for my school failed and a lot of programs had to be cut (which is why I'm not sure there will be a newspaper this year...) this episode makes fun of the budget issue... Anyway, enjoy and tell me what you think...

[Tin Man]

how long did that take you because all of the drawings id take a year to finish. Also very nice.

[Butz]

Hmm...I think it was about 30 mins...
But that's because I've been drawing him so much lately to get into practice, that I can almost draw him without thinking... The part that takes a while is if I have to draw something new, like the bus driver....

[Baby Bear]

Very Nice!
*mutters to himself "I can't even draw stick figures"*
then realizes he said it outload... But that is good I draw stick figures for school and the teachers say NO... I don't know why

[Butz]

Originally posted by Baby Bear
Very Nice!
*mutters to himself "I can't even draw stick figures"*
then realizes he said it outload...

Thanks! And by the way... I said that same exact thing to myself 5 months ago.....

[Shard_IceFire]

Ok no offense but that really stinks...I drew like that when I was 10. Sorry, I didn't intend to sound cruel or anything but it's true.

[fuzie]

amen Shard Icefire, it sux alot! edit the text on the computer or something + it just stinks! i think you could do better

[Silver Knight]

Very nice, I having no artistical talent give it 2 tails up!

[HiryuuX]

Originally posted by Shard_IceFire
Ok no offense but that really stinks...I drew like that when I was 10. Sorry, I didn't intend to sound cruel or anything but it's true.

I kind of agree, I don't think it stinks but it's not the best thing i've seen. I think it's really good to put effort into it though, can't get better without trying.

[Falcor]

Ypu want neeto? Read 8-bit theater =D I red every comic on that site.lol

[Butz]

I'll repost it after I color it and fix it up a bit...
That was the "Straight from paper to scanner" version...
And yes...
I like swords....

[Tin Man]

SWORDS RULE!!!!!

i love drawing them, its Fun Fun.

[slp]

Originally posted by Butz
Ok, here's a preview of my comic strip I'm hopefully doing for my school newspaper...(If not, it may become a *dramatic pause* webcomic!!).. anyway.. I wan't to know what you think...
It's the first one with the improved character in it..
Just a bit of background on it..
The main character's name is Shawn Fox, he has recently moved away from his old school "Pine Forest High School" to a new school with only Human students...(Roughly based on MY school...) Anyway, since the budget for my school failed and a lot of programs had to be cut (which is why I'm not sure there will be a newspaper this year...) this episode makes fun of the budget issue... Anyway, enjoy and tell me what you think...

you should make more comic strips