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Old 04-12-2009, 12:08 AM
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New level, What is it Missing?
Just need to know what its missing, ways to improve it etc.
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Old 04-12-2009, 12:18 AM
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add a table & chairs, or some fencing.
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Old 04-12-2009, 12:22 AM
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It's far too empty. Plus the clumps of detail should be a bit bigger.
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Old 04-12-2009, 12:47 AM
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Added more grass detail, statues, rocks, and a little table.
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Old 04-12-2009, 01:01 AM
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Old 04-12-2009, 01:14 AM
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Another thing, the waterfall seems to be coming from no where? o_O
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Old 04-12-2009, 01:16 AM
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Its coming from the cliffs o.o
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Old 04-12-2009, 01:43 AM
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Another thing, the waterfall seems to be coming from no where? o_O
it leaves you wondering



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Old 04-12-2009, 01:56 AM
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Its coming from the cliffs o.o
No, tthe cliff looks completely behind it. It's not coming from the cliff.
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Old 04-12-2009, 02:07 AM
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How would I make the cliff come forward?
I'm using a waterfall.mng image.
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Old 04-12-2009, 03:30 AM
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No, tthe cliff looks completely behind it. It's not coming from the cliff.
maybe there's a cliff higher up that dangles above the one shown.
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Old 04-12-2009, 04:57 AM
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maybe there's a cliff higher up that dangles above the one shown.
Completely out of perspective with the level :P
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Old 04-12-2009, 06:51 AM
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Old 04-12-2009, 12:17 PM
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I know what to do, make it so it looks like water is above that cliff like a lake so therefore the water seems to be coming from that.
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So like this?
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Old 04-12-2009, 06:07 PM
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Post the level and I'll show you how to fix the water fall
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Old 04-12-2009, 08:44 PM
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Okie doke here it is
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Old 04-12-2009, 08:54 PM
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Okie doke here it is
Not the best edit, but it was basically a demonstation of taking perspective into account. Your waterfall was starting far too early and ending far too late.
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Old 04-12-2009, 09:04 PM
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Thanks :P Forgot about those tiles.
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Old 04-16-2009, 12:26 AM
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Updated it. Was using UN Forums to get tips.
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So like this?
This one looks better than the new imo.
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