Logo test ^^

[Soala]

Here's everything I tried to make a good logo, only in paint tho.
just tell me what you think.

I wanted to make some sort of Harmony, while representing most of stuff on Silence. It may not be as good as Crystia's logo for sure, but I'll try to photoshop stuffs

Comments/Criticizm/Ideas.

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Leaves (used on GUI actually) and sword from Aeko xD

[Galdor]

I donno the items feel kinda random together:P

[Programmer]

It lacks a significant amount of detail, especially on the leaves. All I see are 4 colors. Try to put in a bit more effort into them. Also, perhaps try to add a simple background to it?

It's just ... something about it doesn't quite appeal to people.

Just my opinion on it. Otherwise, very nice job.

[Soala]

Yeah it still needs some work, I'll see what I can do for leaves.
Also I've been told that its the book that confuses it all, with the dark outlines :/

[Nataxo]

its beautiful.

though what the hell with the book xD

[Soala]

Originally Posted by Nataxo

its beautiful.

Aww thanks

Originally Posted by Nataxo

though what the hell with the book xD

For the book, it's just to represent the magic way for exemple spells, etc..
Tell me if I really need to remove it o_o

Worked out a bit more on the leaves, chek the difference o_o I also did very dark red outlines on the book, so maybe it fits with the style of the leaves
and the sword ? There is no real lines to show forms.

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[Nataxo]

Originally Posted by alexandralove

Aww thanks



For the book, it's just to represent the magic way for exemple spells, etc..
Tell me if I really need to remove it o_o

Worked out a bit more on the leaves, chek the difference o_o I also did very dark red outlines on the book, so maybe it fits with the style of the leaves
and the sword ? There is no real lines to show forms.

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perhaps make some sort of magical aura around the book... that will make it magical >:]

[Soala]

Originally Posted by nataxo

perhaps make some sort of magical aura around the book... That will make it magical >:]

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AWWWW FORUMS CANT SHOW HALF TRANSPARENCY

[Nataxo]

Originally Posted by alexandralove

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AWWWW FORUMS CANT SHOW HALF TRANSPARENCY

you can make it better.

make like a fairy flying around the book with magical dust and musical notes, also add rainbows and more sparkling aura.

>:]

[Soala]

Originally Posted by Nataxo

you can make it better.

make like a fairy flying around the book with magical dust and musical notes, also add rainbows and more sparkling aura.

>:]

I don't wanna do tons o_o

Well here's another book...looks smaller, with less pages o_O
I guess I failed it?

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[Nataxo]

Originally Posted by alexandralove

I don't wanna do tons o_o

Well here's another book...looks smaller, with less pages o_O
I guess I failed it?

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its awsome

i was just making sujestions xD

[DrakilorP2P]

Originally Posted by Nataxo

you can make it better.

make like a fairy flying around the book with magical dust and musical notes, also add rainbows and more sparkling aura.

>:]

Logos are supposed to be simple.

[Soala]

Here's the definitive one for now, until I get some new ideas
Bigger book, and added shadows all around the img
Comments plz

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[Programmer]

Originally Posted by alexandralove

Here's the definitive one for now, until I get some new ideas
Bigger book, and added shadows all around the img
Comments plz

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It looks a bit blurry and confusing - the size of the objects aren't in relationship to each other. Also, possibly get a smoother looking sword?

Despite that, looking good.

[Codein]

I'm not big on logo design but they just look like seperate objects and they don't come together well to form a single entity, what a logo should be, in my opinion.

[Soala]

Originally Posted by Programmer

It looks a bit blurry and confusing - the size of the objects aren't in relationship to each other. Also, possibly get a smoother looking sword?

Yeah it looks a bit too strong actually, I just realized when I tried to put it in another background type, and it looked horrible

Originally Posted by Programmer

Despite that, looking good.

Thanks

I'll try to make smooth as you said

[Soala]

Originally Posted by Programmer

the size of the objects aren't in relationship to each other

Ever tried to make a book 4x4 ?

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