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Old 12-01-2007, 03:15 PM
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im not comfortable with the composition of the level but the detailing seems nice to me
i would rate it 5/10
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Old 12-01-2007, 03:49 PM
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Cliffs have minor errors but nothing too bad.

Your path style reminds me of Zodiac...I like it a bit more calmed. Grass on grass looks ok on the bottom but you used too many of the small bits. I like the way you group your swamps, you seem to use too many blocking tiles for the detail. However I think it looks ok.

You need to work on your water styling. It looks like one big tile error. Trees are fine.

Overall I'd say 5/10, which is pretty ok.
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Old 12-01-2007, 06:26 PM
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Like crono said, the cliffs has a few errors but only minors. I actully like the detailing. But I don't like the house at all.. The main of the house is okay, but the thing to the left don't look geometric at all to me. But overall I think it's a good level.

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Old 12-02-2007, 09:49 AM
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Wow, I like it a lot! 7/10
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Old 12-02-2007, 09:02 PM
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Your cliffs are nice, only see a few errors in it. But **** i never tried cliffin that much. Your water tiling needs more work instead of making it straight, same with your pathing. Detailing looks nice but too much bushes imo. And i dont know why you combined a house with some trees lol.

Overall nice work 5.5/10
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Old 12-03-2007, 05:10 AM
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Looks very good so far, I made a couple of GFX's for the waterwall openings, you can use them if you like. I just know that its hard to make openings like that look good with the tiles.
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Old 12-03-2007, 07:26 AM
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Old 12-04-2007, 05:04 PM
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And here I am trying to help a new player, and it happens to be someone else under cover, someone that takes names from characters in Naruto. What a waste of my time.
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Old 12-04-2007, 06:42 PM
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Old 12-05-2007, 03:15 AM
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I think I allreday gave enough hints in my last reply. I don't understand why I didn't get it earlier myself.
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