RP News: A Death and a new Shadow

[MrCharles]

Originally posted by deman1171
How was mine not original and how was it hard to read? are you dumb or what? can you read?

Constant run on sentences... bad grammar.

Yours wasn't original because have you noticed that a lot of sotries follow the same path as yours?

Happy family. Parents die. Child goes off alone and gets turned into a green blob. See? every story happens that way.