"A High School Tail" with the redesigned Shawn Fox

[Butz]

Ok, here's a preview of my comic strip I'm hopefully doing for my school newspaper...(If not, it may become a *dramatic pause* webcomic!!).. anyway.. I wan't to know what you think...
It's the first one with the improved character in it..
Just a bit of background on it..
The main character's name is Shawn Fox, he has recently moved away from his old school "Pine Forest High School" to a new school with only Human students...(Roughly based on MY school...) Anyway, since the budget for my school failed and a lot of programs had to be cut (which is why I'm not sure there will be a newspaper this year...) this episode makes fun of the budget issue... Anyway, enjoy and tell me what you think...