Kiwi's Levels [Criticism Appreciated]

[Kiwi27]

Hey there,
Lately I've been really wanting to apply for a staff position on a server. Which one exactly, I'm not sure. But I'm not really sure if I'm good enough yet for that, so I really want to get the best I can be before I apply for anything.

I'd like some criticism on a few levels, please. Say anything you think is wrong, or mucked up, just as long as it isn't hurtful to me personally. I'm all ears.

This first one is one I posted a while ago, asking about some grass I had in there. I read your criticisms in that thread, and tried to act on them, but I didn't really finish all of it because I felt like doing other things.
It uses the Atlantis tileset, which I did not make. But it is amazing. I like to use it because, unlike pics1, it doesn't blind me at night.

This second one uses the Delteria tileset, which I decided to play around with. I planned to add a few houses, or the edge of a town up the top, but, not being used to the tileset, I couldn't make it look right and added other various things. The bridge is a NPC I made from one of the Delteria screenshots.


Lastly, I decided to make a level with the Stroseria tileset, but this isn't finished yet. The little cliffs were from something that Skyzer showed me that I decided to try out. They didn't work out too well though, and they're kind of ugly . This level isn't finished yet, but I do plan to finish it.



So, like I said, criticism is appreciated.

- Kiwi