A weapon I call Ryusou

[Third3rd]

Well I wanted to go into depth in Dev within Graal. So I ventured into Graphics. I sooner found out I was decent since I can draw irl and having experience with graphics. Here is a Spear I wanted to make for Zodiac. The first image is the one I want to do my best on but I already know from already posting these on Zodiac forum. Not everyones great at giving tips nor great criticism. So id like you all to examine and do some tips or ideas so I can better improve the Spear and my GFX in the future. Also some heads up I already know the blade looks flat and poorly shaded. I am not the best at mashing different silvers and dark shades of silver.