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Old 08-01-2005, 01:32 PM
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A level.

Hmm, here's another one of my levels I made a few days ago or so. If it seems familiar. It's because it's on th Npulse forums aswell.

Rate, crit, and of course tell me how I can fix assuming it can be fixed.
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Old 08-01-2005, 02:29 PM
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Old 08-01-2005, 02:55 PM
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It's too busy and cluttered to me. You've got some nice work in it, but overall the effect is way too overwhelming to enjoy.
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Old 08-01-2005, 03:36 PM
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Hmm, here's another one of my levels I made a few days ago or so. If it seems familiar. It's because it's on th Npulse forums aswell.

Rate, crit, and of course tell me how I can fix assuming it can be fixed.

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Old 08-01-2005, 04:57 PM
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It's definatly impressive o_O
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Old 08-01-2005, 06:11 PM
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Old 08-02-2005, 12:51 AM
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Those window thingy majigers..open spaces on the house or w/e they hell it is confuse me. and yea there is a lot of detail. But its cool as long as someone does make a entire OW like that where everything becomes super clutter mania. Good level though =D.
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Old 08-02-2005, 02:25 AM
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Rofl the spaces where like the theyre 1 tile high and like 2-3 wide rofl Its so people can sit there and peer out with just their eyes at night and freak people out >:]

The funny thing is, there isn't that much detail in there. There isn't alot of long grass rofl or other grass detailing if you look closely.

Quite funny, cause I try to tone it down a bit and I do so, but then I put to much crap in there. and that my friends is a typical in your face NZ person.

Thanks for the good comments guys.
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Old 08-02-2005, 09:28 AM
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Another Kiwi, nice

I like the level overall, but I don't really like the way you do side cliffs - I prefer the way the tileset is made to fit together. Otherwise though, love it. Good stuff
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Old 08-02-2005, 06:26 PM
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WTF Chicken you still suck.

Good level though!
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Old 08-03-2005, 12:34 AM
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Nice. 8/10

I see one half grass on the top left.
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Old 08-03-2005, 05:35 AM
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Neo, you know you love me rofl.

Matt, the half grass works if you think about it. because their hypothetically (spelt wrong) should be another level next to it.

The way I see it I don't have a problem using half grass on 0x 64x etc because there should be a level next to it .

Thanks for the comment though man. I know it doesn't look right, but it still works XD cause the other part should be in the other level.
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Old 08-03-2005, 05:52 AM
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My only real complaint would be that this level is a bit too cluttered/unwalkable.

However, I love the tree stand in the upper right.
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Old 08-03-2005, 02:15 PM
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My only real complaint would be that this level is a bit too cluttered/unwalkable.

However, I love the tree stand in the upper right.
I agree
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Old 08-03-2005, 09:42 PM
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god what the hell did the area get hit with a tornado earthquake and get set on fire at the same time.
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Old 08-03-2005, 10:17 PM
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Old 08-04-2005, 02:03 AM
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Ohh, rofl. XD I'll fix that XD I thought you meant the one up and left a bit. and Mafukie give me hugs and kisses; if you are not actually gonna post a comment either telling me what you dislike or what you like. and what needs fixing.


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Old 08-04-2005, 02:29 AM
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Old 08-06-2005, 10:08 AM
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Ohh, rofl. XD I'll fix that XD I thought you meant the one up and left a bit. and Mafukie give me hugs and kisses; if you are not actually gonna post a comment either telling me what you dislike or what you like. and what needs fixing.


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sorry it is not your level, it is just the new tile standards people came up with. And what Methril said, it is too clogged just like 80% of the new level designers do. Gives me a headache.
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