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Old 03-07-2006, 09:59 PM
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Tileset of Elk.



Phew...I worked 2 hours on it so far...
I stopped now because its 9 PM here and I have to do homework now
It will be a complete tileset for catacombs and a church...

Rate it xP
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:02 PM
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7.5/10, not bad but:

1 - It's not complete
2 - the perspective on the overlapping part seems a bit off

Anyway, still good. Complete it, I like it a lot and don't really have any critique. Nice use of dithering.
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:08 PM
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I like it, however you'd need to make the walkway an image for it to have a decent effect.
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:10 PM
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5.5/10

Tile variation (bricks with cracks, that sort of stuff).
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:53 PM
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Tile variation (bricks with cracks, that sort of stuff).
Maybe he's planning to get that done with images like on that server you work on.
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Old 03-07-2006, 11:01 PM
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Maybe he's planning to get that done with images like on that server you work on.
I think that was a bad idea. Easier to do it with tiles.
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:11 PM
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As you can see maybe I fixed something here:



Zero if you think its a 5,5 worth only because of tile variation...
my opinion to this is, make it better
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I like it as it is now...and I will complete it tomorrow maybe.
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:17 PM
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I like it. Very nice.
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:24 PM
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Depending on the color of the floor tile, you will need to up the contrast on the wall tiles, or you will cause eye strain. Also, I feel the indent is too deep, doesn't make visual sense because of this.

If you do need to up the contrast, the easiest way to do this would be to make the bottom of the bricks black with a single line, but you may find black is too dark.
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Old 03-07-2006, 10:49 PM
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I really like this, it would look especially good in graal, i think ive met my match at pixeling :O Probably better than me infact. lol
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Old 03-08-2006, 12:04 AM
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G'night
Thanks for all the critic, helped me a bit.
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Old 03-08-2006, 04:21 AM
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Your archways need arching stones (keystone etc).
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Old 03-08-2006, 05:19 AM
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Your archways need arching stones (keystone etc).
I was going to mention architectural features
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Old 03-08-2006, 05:13 PM
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Do you think it's better now? I do :o
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Old 03-08-2006, 06:14 PM
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Do you think it's better now? I do :o
I don't.
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Old 03-08-2006, 06:05 PM
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Old 03-08-2006, 06:19 PM
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Old 03-08-2006, 08:05 PM
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I really like the archway of stones, but you need to mess with it a little bit. The way it overlaps the top stone ledge doesn't sit right with me
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Old 03-08-2006, 09:41 PM
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Better now?
Better, but the start of the archways still is "meh".
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Old 03-08-2006, 09:56 PM
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I like it and it's ok...well yea it looks a bit weird but it's ok



I've just made the tiles so I wont change it again



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Btw, the Tileset has only 28 colors ;P
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Old 03-08-2006, 09:58 PM
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Btw, the Tileset has only 28 colors ;P
I noticed. You did a pretty good job on the texturing... but there's very little contrast (visually).
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Old 03-08-2006, 10:03 PM
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Hm w/e now I have to do the left/right walls + Floors and the whole tileset with Water.
That will be easier for sure (L/R walls)
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I wanna see this finish. Looks nice in my opinion, just needs a bit more contrast.
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Hawt. I wanna see them custom floors
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I really like it, nice work Elk
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Old 03-09-2006, 05:17 PM
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Nice!

Now I remember the reason I hired as GAT on Babylon.

Haha, nice work Elk, looks quite nice!
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Old 03-09-2006, 05:43 PM
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I hope you're going to use a prettier floor tile? And perhaps add tile variations (cracked bricks, dirty bricks - that stuff).

As it is, that grey floor doesn't do the wall justice
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Old 03-09-2006, 06:15 PM
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I hope you're going to use a prettier floor tile? And perhaps add tile variations (cracked bricks, dirty bricks - that stuff).

As it is, that grey floor doesn't do the wall justice
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Old 03-09-2006, 07:01 PM
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LOL you thought I would use that floor XD?
Rofl xD
I'm GFXing a floor now it's just hard to make a floor what is usable as tiles...(dirty cracked bricks)
I thought about the same...but it's hard
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Old 03-10-2006, 06:12 AM
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good job, you make it how you want, those people arent making a game, are you?
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good job, you make it how you want, those people arent making a game
It's called critique. He brought it here to ask us what we think, and what we think should be improved.

It really frustrates me when people come on here and get upset over honest critiquing. A LOT.
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Old 03-10-2006, 12:51 PM
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-_- stop asking me for jobs on games or servers...i get like 3 forum pms everyday from several players who wants me to work on their game/server

MY ANSWER IS NO!

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Im gonna add windows and tile variations soon
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Old 03-10-2006, 01:24 PM
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MY ANSWER IS NO!

And 2.

Im gonna add windows and tile variations soon

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Old 03-10-2006, 03:34 PM
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this guy is freaking me out...he pmed me like 5 times now if i want to work for cebro or something like that lol
its supposed to be a game
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Old 03-11-2006, 12:15 AM
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Elk, like always hot. Not even going trough the trouble of rating it since that is just cheesy. The tiles are fine but some additional suggestions:

*Try making a "corner" version of each "normal" brick part. Try shading the edge a bit (left or right, depending on wich side it is) that should look nicer. (edit: nvm just saw that you already had them, you just made a tile error in the preview level)

*Try making a "pillar" that goes into the wall. It completes the whole gothic? building style.
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