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Old 07-20-2005, 04:30 PM
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Rate my level

You know the drill, comments on how to improve + rating.

Credits go to Wan for helping me with the waterfall cliffing area. I had trouble with the it so he fixed it.
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Old 07-20-2005, 04:55 PM
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Path: Cool, nice, yeah, I like the style, nothing much else to say! HOW DO YOU DO IT!!!1

Cliffs: Good stuff, plain and simple!

Overall: Great level, not too much in it, it doesn't need to be that over the top as by the looks of it the level would be a filler level, rather than one with a big purpose, so it's good not to distract the player!
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Old 07-20-2005, 08:07 PM
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It's pretty awesome. I only noticed a few things.

One: There are no stones on the dirt paths around the stream after the waterfall, or around the path.

Two: There are no stones/bubbly things in the shallow water

Three: Things in red squares

Top Square: That one flat piece looks weird, It can be fixed, but that whole left side of the stream will have to be re-edged with shallow water to make it fit.

Bottom Squares: Where shallow water meets cliff is always troublesome... Don't be afraid to make a custom image for it though!

Copy all of the shallow water edge tiles into an image program, and remove all of the dark blue. Place all of the half transparent tiles into one big image. You can use setimgpart in an NPC to make these spots look much nicer.

EDIT: Aw, hell... Here, I made one you can use.

Four: That dude with the mask is uber fugly. Wtfs?

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Old 07-21-2005, 10:07 AM
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Four: That dude with the mask is uber fugly. Wtfs?
i thought that also! anyways i like it crono way better than my levels
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Old 07-21-2005, 12:59 AM
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Haha thanks. Wandaman had fixed it for me but I didnt want to use custom tilesets for a show level. I have the level uploaded on babylon with his tiles though, but thanks <3

I'll fix what you said and post it later.
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Old 07-21-2005, 06:02 AM
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Haunter pointed out everything I saw.

Pretty cool.
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Old 07-21-2005, 03:18 PM
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Fixed the things Haunter was talking about, I think.
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Old 07-21-2005, 07:00 PM
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Great level Crono! !

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Old 07-21-2005, 11:56 PM
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I like it, except for the 2 half grasses all the way on the left, or maybe that's just the page cut-off.

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Old 07-22-2005, 12:04 AM
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I still say that some of the water looks screwed up.
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Old 07-22-2005, 12:35 AM
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Old 07-22-2005, 06:32 AM
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Detail the Water and the Dirt alittle more Crono =) 8/10. Dont mind some of these kids here lol they couldnt make a decent level if they tried.
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Old 07-22-2005, 09:24 AM
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Minh, that's how you do the level properly. You're used to seeing how they do it on UN.
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Old 07-23-2005, 02:18 AM
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Minh, that's how you do the level properly. You're used to seeing how they do it on UN.
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Old 07-27-2005, 11:24 PM
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You know the drill, comments on how to improve + rating.

Credits go to Wan for helping me with the waterfall cliffing area. I had trouble with the it so he fixed it.
That is a SWEET level i like it alot Good job mate
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Old 07-29-2005, 10:40 PM
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Edited some stuffs

Recycle: cliffs are supposed to be done that way.
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