Monster.

SayianOozaru · #1 05-12-2007, 03:00 AM

So what do you guys think?

How can this be improved upon?

xXziroXx · #2 05-12-2007, 03:04 AM

You can start with reshading it completely. It looks like a plastic figurine. Design is nice though!

smirt362 · #3 05-12-2007, 03:10 AM

Try not to make him look so shiny.
Also his arms look a tad weird.

SayianOozaru · #4 05-12-2007, 03:31 AM

Its a sketch for a monster, on kingdoms (probably). But when I showed those players, they didnt give any crits, just said "thats badass". So I posted here.

Hes supposed to be shiny, btw.

MrAnonymous_P2P · #5 05-12-2007, 04:41 AM

His feet look a tad weird. Plus the outline is pretty dark. But that might have been what you were going for.

DustyPorViva · #6 05-12-2007, 04:56 AM

Dunno why he's supposed to be shiny, it looks quite odd. I'd say give him actual hair and give him a nice shine on their hair, not his shading.
The outline is dark, and I don't quite think it fits the art of GK, but if you keep it, fix all the jagged pixels on it.

Crow · #7 05-12-2007, 09:41 AM

Well, most of the outlines on GK are dark, so thats just fine I guess. But I agree, the shading is really bad right now. Hair would rock :P

Matt · #8 05-13-2007, 08:30 AM

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Originally Posted by MrAnonymous_P2P

His feet look a tad weird. Plus the outline is pretty dark. But that might have been what you were going for.

Agreed.

Gambet · #9 05-13-2007, 02:37 PM

This monster isn't scary, nor intimidating

kia345 · #10 05-13-2007, 04:40 PM

He makes me think Sonic the Hedgehog on steroids

Zideruic · #11 05-13-2007, 07:54 PM

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Originally Posted by kia345

He makes me think Sonic the Hedgehog on steroids

with a little dog mixed in there.

SayianOozaru · #12 05-14-2007, 06:02 AM

Sorry was out yesterday, and today. Just got back on to the forums.

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Originally Posted by Dusty

Dunno why he's supposed to be shiny, it looks quite odd. I'd say give him actual hair and give him a nice shine on their hair, not his shading.
The outline is dark, and I don't quite think it fits the art of GK, but if you keep it, fix all the jagged pixels on it

Well I figured since the 'lord' monsters on GK are shaded with a shine, that I should stick to doing something like that. That's the only reason why.

(check attachments, did the best I could to try to match the graphics)

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Originally Posted by Gambet

This monster isn't scary, nor intimidating

Either is the Glok Lord, or Bunny Lord.

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Originally Posted by Mr

His feet look a tad weird. Plus the outline is pretty dark. But that might have been what you were going for.

Well, I was just playing with the mouse, and that outline ended up comming out, so I stuck with it. I didn't want it to resemble anything in-life.

DustyPorViva · #13 05-14-2007, 06:42 AM

Well, I think it works with the shine with the other stuff because of their textures. Mushrooms can be shiny, blobs of slime can, bomy's because of their shells, but it just really doesn't fit with hair. I'd say the size should be well enough to determine its status along with other lords. In this case, I think you could sacrifice that bit of detail in order to make the graphics better.

SayianOozaru · #14 05-14-2007, 07:26 AM

Here I tried to edit them a bit. (Thankfully I saved the outline with just the main colors

)

I tried using less colors on the one to the left, and tried making it look like hair. The center is the first one. The one to the right, I took the first one and just added a little effect.

ff7chocoboknight · #15 05-14-2007, 12:13 PM

Woah! Great job, Sayian!

xXziroXx · #16 05-14-2007, 04:14 PM

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Originally Posted by SayianOozaru

Here I tried to edit them a bit. (Thankfully I saved the outline with just the main colors

)

I tried using less colors on the one to the left, and tried making it look like hair. The center is the first one. The one to the right, I took the first one and just added a little effect.

Make one without the shine and with real hair!

anubis_wing · #17 05-14-2007, 05:07 PM

I think it'd look better if he was standing, it looks fiercly unbalanced.

smirt362 · #18 05-14-2007, 05:56 PM

It would look really good if you weren't lazy and didn't use the burn and dodge tools...

Zideruic · #19 05-14-2007, 09:24 PM

If you spent a small bit of time on the one that actually looks like fur and not red iron it'd look amazing.

Moonite · #20 05-14-2007, 10:35 PM

"GK Graphics Team" okay...

Zideruic · #21 05-14-2007, 11:10 PM

Reminds me of a friend of mine resembling your name.

SayianOozaru · #22 05-15-2007, 12:25 AM

Not sure if i missed any.

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Originally Posted by smirt

It would look really good if you weren't lazy and didn't use the burn and dodge tools...

Actually, I have the "Burn" tool (Not sure about the Dodge tool?). But the "Burn" tool goes straight to black for me.

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Originally Posted by Moonite

"GK Graphics Team" okay...

Still mad about those MSoG's I take it?

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Originally Posted by Zid

Reminds me of a friend of mine resembling your name.

...Uhm, right?

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Originally Posted by Anubis

I think it'd look better if he was standing, it looks fiercly unbalanced.

I think I said in my first post (it might be in the post on the GK part though) that it was a sketch, I dont want to work on the final product until I find figure out how shade the same as the other lords. :P

If I missed you, its because I don't want to take the 2 minutes to load the first page. (Dialup sucks)

Moonite · #23 05-15-2007, 01:28 PM

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Originally Posted by SayianOozaru

Not sure if i missed any.
Still mad about those MSoG's I take it?

i just dont like it? looks like plastic

ff7chocoboknight · #24 05-16-2007, 05:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Zideruic

Reminds me of a friend of mine resembling your name.

ZOMG UR MEH HERO!