New Speeder?

pooper200000 · #1 09-07-2006, 03:25 AM

I don't know if this could be a new speeder or what Im kinda busy but thought i would post it and see what people thought of it. I know it will have to be bigger and the red should be fire effects like from the jp. Please post positive critism!

SayianOozaru · #2 09-07-2006, 05:41 AM

your going to get all kinds of critism when you post here...but since you only want positive, i wont say anything...just keep practicing...

MisterMastermind · #3 09-07-2006, 01:51 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

I don't know if this could be a new speeder or what Im kinda busy but thought i would post it and see what people thought of it. I know it will have to be bigger and the red should be fire effects like from the jp. Please post positive critism!

... No. It lacks detail, and color variation. I also dislike the shape. Don't expect all positive comments if you post here. Ask sayian for some lessons.

Huwajux · #4 09-07-2006, 07:25 PM

Um...ok, if you're serious then take note of this.
No shading, lack of colours, it's tiny, it has only 1 sprite position and the position it has has no angle at all.

Crono · #5 09-07-2006, 07:49 PM

What is that?

Looks like a 2D space ship you find in old games.

Graphic wise it needs shading, better outline. It's just a yellow thing.

pooper200000 · #6 09-07-2006, 11:45 PM

OK to many post to cnt c and v so heres my huger response. 1. I just wanted to know if you like the idea. Ill finish it tonight if Im not to busy but im doing p.s.e.o. so im a little rushed. I know i didn't post side views and teh point would be like a glider/speeder maybe bought not sure yet. The front would be where your head is back legs etc. Arms would be on side. Ill work on it actually do any shading and yees I know there isn't all positive critiscm but the positive kind helps without letting me know im a the worst gfxer EVER!

I won't ask sayain for lesons i just like screwin around that all

MisterMastermind · #7 09-07-2006, 11:52 PM

I love the idea.

pooper200000 · #8 09-07-2006, 11:53 PM

for the person on top of speeder? Im gonna owrk on it im just spamming the forums for a bit first. And the idea for it buyable you likey?

MisterMastermind · #9 09-07-2006, 11:55 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

for the person on top of speeder? Im gonna owrk on it im just spamming the forums for a bit first. And the idea for it buyable you likey?

I think it'd be a cool position for a glider, kind of like the speeders.

pooper200000 · #10 09-07-2006, 11:56 PM

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Originally Posted by MisterMastermind

I think it'd be a cool position for a glider, kind of like the speeders.

answer the pother part! Buyable or no? THen it ould have speed of speeder and only transport no guns. I kinda want it to look like a star wars thinger mabotater!

heres teh new one tell me what you like the h stands for my hands i didn't put an f and the sn is where my head would start in that general area the fire is for the flame effects form jp

Leoxx · #11 09-08-2006, 03:44 AM

1. is it gona be on all the planets? 2. Its gona hurt my eyes to look at that on iraica from the highlighted yellow

i like the idea, but then u got to think of how much to sell for, how its used, how fast it goes, how much dmg it take wen hit, and how much hp it has.
I think it would be better with a gray and the outer rim would look good as it is with the light gray color. and i guess the shape is good too, but it could look better a little bit smaller, not looking like it can hold two ppl. really good idea though

pooper200000 · #12 09-08-2006, 11:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Leoxx

1. is it gona be on all the planets? 2. Its gona hurt my eyes to look at that on iraica from the highlighted yellow

i like the idea, but then u got to think of how much to sell for, how its used, how fast it goes, how much dmg it take wen hit, and how much hp it has.
I think it would be better with a gray and the outer rim would look good as it is with the light gray color. and i guess the shape is good too, but it could look better a little bit smaller, not looking like it can hold two ppl. really good idea though

HP none it flys in air mechs freeze it it sits there it has no weapons. It goes as fast as speeder it would sell for 18k-20k still not sure. I am working on the colors as i post. It wouldn't hold 2 people they would be on top of it. I am going ot add different shades of yellow im just really busy with p.s.e.o so not much time

. Ill post new one in awhile

pooper200000 · #13 09-12-2006, 11:24 PM

Sorry for teh bouble post but just thought I would say maybe some other people should try ot gf something like this since I definitely can't.

dude2020 · #14 09-13-2006, 12:24 AM

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Sorry for teh bouble post but just thought I would say maybe some other people should try ot gf something like this since I definitely can't.

EDIT BOTTON!!!!!

dude2020 · #15 09-13-2006, 12:25 AM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

answer the pother part! Buyable or no? THen it ould have speed of speeder and only transport no guns. I kinda want it to look like a star wars thinger mabotater!

heres teh new one tell me what you like the h stands for my hands i didn't put an f and the sn is where my head would start in that general area the fire is for the flame effects form jp

u jsut made a Star wars ship cept its how shalli but this uglyer?

pooper200000 · #16 09-13-2006, 12:44 AM

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EDIT BOTTON!!!!!

Edit button was gone it disapears after a very short time. Oh and you double posted anyways!

Anyone here want to take a try and Ive only seen the first star wars movie so if its like taht then sure I guess.

Draenin · #17 09-13-2006, 12:51 AM

Reminds me of the Epoch, if you were to turn it the other way around. However, the porportions are off on the tops of the left and right views. Those lines should be shallower, as you're viewing it from the side. I like the shape though.

pooper200000 · #18 09-13-2006, 12:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Draenin

Reminds me of the Epoch, if you were to turn it the other way around. However, the porportions are off on the tops of the left and right views. Those lines should be shallower, as you're viewing it from the side. I like the shape though.

Epoch? Please if you know what it should look like it i can't gfx worth my acc name.

lancelot9 · #19 09-13-2006, 05:06 AM

looks like the thing from StarWars episode 1..

Draenin · #20 09-13-2006, 11:00 AM

I will not work on this like you asked me to unless you fix the porportions on the top of the left and right views. All you did was flip the image, and that doesn't work out well when it actually gets detailed.

pooper200000 · #21 09-17-2006, 01:47 AM

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I will not work on this like you asked me to unless you fix the porportions on the top of the left and right views. All you did was flip the image, and that doesn't work out well when it actually gets detailed.

Oops! Sorry draenin I never looked back at this and yes I flipped the image. How should I "fix" the proportions on the top part? Ill post what I did to try and fix it and played with the colors a bit. Ok i just tried to attach it and it said this:
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If one of the mods will give me permissino ill post a link ot imageshack.

Admins · #22 09-17-2006, 05:27 AM

We are currently modifying some parts of the forums, sorry when there are problems with attachments right now.

pooper200000 · #23 09-17-2006, 08:55 PM

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We are currently modifying some parts of the forums, sorry when there are problems with attachments right now.

NP im going to post link to imageshack ina while darlene the great moon goddess gave me permission. Heres the link draenin is that what you wanted or ?
<a href="http://img124.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newvehgo7.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/4415/newvehgo7.th.png" border="0" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" /></a>

Huwajux · #24 09-18-2006, 09:42 PM

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Good Lord, what is that?

pooper200000 · #25 09-19-2006, 12:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Huwajux

Good Lord, what is that?

You know I can't gfx worth my aco**** name tahts why im asking dreanin for help

MisterMastermind · #26 09-20-2006, 12:19 AM

Taboo fighter from starwars

pooper200000 · #27 09-20-2006, 12:52 AM

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Taboo fighter from starwars

What the heck is a taboo fighet?!?!?!?!

Sulukra · #28 09-20-2006, 01:17 AM

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Taboo fighter from starwars

Taboo fighter?...No comment.

Naboo Fighter.

pooper200000 · #29 09-20-2006, 01:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Sulukra

Taboo fighter?...No comment.

Naboo Fighter.

What is that?!?!?!?!

MisterMastermind · #30 09-20-2006, 11:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Sulukra

Taboo fighter?...No comment.

Naboo Fighter.

You caught my spelling mistake.

pooper200000 · #31 09-20-2006, 11:49 PM

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Originally Posted by MisterMastermind

You caught my spelling mistake.

WHAT IS IT??!?!?!?

dude2020 · #32 09-20-2006, 11:57 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

WHAT IS IT??!?!?!?

Watch Star Wars episode 1

if it still sells lol if they dont look on eBay

Googi · #33 09-21-2006, 12:21 AM

Yeah, I have a criticism. You're posting bitmaps.

pooper200000 · #34 09-21-2006, 02:44 AM

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Yeah, I have a criticism. You're posting bitmaps.

Bitmaps? I post images

Googi · #35 09-21-2006, 03:02 AM

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Bitmaps? I post images

Calling bitmaps images is like calling Zone a shooter game.

Stone_Tower · #36 09-21-2006, 03:06 AM

Good idea, but the space-craft is too small and too flat, keep up at it though.

pooper200000 · #37 09-21-2006, 01:29 PM

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Calling bitmaps images is like calling Zone a shooter game.

It is basically its really a pking game and thats the only type of document I can attach.

Draenin · #38 09-21-2006, 02:24 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

Oops! Sorry draenin I never looked back at this and yes I flipped the image. How should I "fix" the proportions on the top part? Ill post what I did to try and fix it and played with the colors a bit.

I want you to fix this part. Right now, it looks like it's being viewed from the top, rather than the sides. The bottom side should go down farther than the top side.

SayianOozaru · #39 09-21-2006, 04:12 PM

Draenin, just redo the entire image. The thing looks smaller than the player, so not resizing it will just make it a waste of time. So...resize it, and finish it

Draenin · #40 09-21-2006, 04:17 PM

He wanted to me finish his template, so his template needs to be correct. I shouldn't have to complete his lazy outlining.