A Level?

fowlplay4 · #1 11-20-2005, 05:04 AM

Let the criticism begin.

Chicken_l33t · #2 11-20-2005, 05:41 AM

All your paths are too square. I don't really like the way you have placed the long grass either. Try some different sizes and shapes with it aswell.

Cliffs, trees are done done nicely. The shadowy brown/black thing in the we doorway in the trees is the wrong colour. and the Shrubs and bush mixed are pretty ugly.

Eagle · #3 11-20-2005, 06:18 AM

It looks like you used copy + paste alot. I don't really like the way you did your path. I don't really like the level, but it's done right, I suppose. I didn't see many tile errors on a quick glance.

fowlplay4 · #4 11-20-2005, 08:21 AM

I appreciate your criticism/constructive advice, and

Tile Errors other then the tree enterance?
Would you mind pointing them out?

Codein · #5 11-20-2005, 01:13 PM

I actually like the simplicity of it all. A bit more detail wouldn't go amiss though.

Infernix · #6 11-20-2005, 03:12 PM

Hey guys O_O I personally think this level is badass, now I think this not because of the grass detail, paths, and fence (Which need work) But I really like the setup for some reason and its nice and simple. Mainly I think it stimulated me for a ideas for my own levels lol.