comments on my level

MysticX2X · #1 09-16-2005, 12:07 AM

well im getting into level making right now, i done it here and their but im learning new things now. Please give comments and what things i can do better on.

Edit: just added a bit more detail , the next one is the newer one(mysticlevel2)

excaliber7388 · #2 09-16-2005, 02:48 AM

It's okay, has some small tile errors, i circled em for ya. Some of the flattened /cut grass is bunched up randomly, the warter doesn't match, the barrels look wierd, trees are connected wrong, too many green tiles around the path, grass on the building, 2nd+story windows with 1st story windo sills...there my be more. Over all, not too bad, keep at it

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Chicken_l33t · #3 09-16-2005, 07:22 AM

Your whole pond thing is wrong. Use the tiles correctly, it's one big tile error.
Change the path, do the outline and then fill it with just the middle parts and you shouldt have any problems with it. and remove those things at the front of the house, actually remove the whole house and re do it.

I suggest looking at other peoples levels and learning from them, but atleast you're trying and it's a good start

Check other peoples levels out on the forums. and learn, I found that to be the best way.

Crono · #4 09-16-2005, 06:45 PM

That house is much better than what I could do. You just need to work on your tile errors.

Lao_Su2 · #5 09-16-2005, 07:20 PM

I think its a pretty good level for a start. Really I think you might have used the predefined path tool there is and I honestly think that it makes your level look odd. I think that if you maybe made a little bit more space between tiles it would look better. The object is not to fill every single space with something. But i think that with a little bit more work and spacing it would turn out ok.Good job.

Infernix · #6 09-16-2005, 09:44 PM

Ahhh lets see...Tree Done wrong, Pond just a Giant piece of tile error,House is trash redo it, to many straight edges,Level is wide and ahh boring nothing there, and probobly should use pole bottom gfx when you try to put pole bottom tiles on anything that isnt a green grass tile. Anywyas yea your level is horrible but your just starting out so of course it is. Keep at it.

MysticX2X · #7 09-16-2005, 10:26 PM

the grass path was not a outline, i put that in after, and yea somone already told me about the trees and what tile to put on the lower half. I didnt really have an idea to this level and just did somethign as i went along but ill show you some new changes to the level, i noticed that the pond was messed up too.