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Old 08-17-2003, 09:56 PM
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Hey for all of you who dont know I finally registerd on the forums Here is a tile set I made for zenkou please give me tips on how I can improve it.Or just tell me how much it sucks or how much you like it. any way just reply...

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Edit: This is not the complete Tile set.I just started making this last night =P
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Old 08-17-2003, 10:00 PM
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Looks good so far, but the mushroom looks like an arrow. o_O
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Old 08-17-2003, 10:14 PM
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Ya I was kinda going for that but I might make it rounder and have some more flaws so it dosnt look so shiney.Also the water is almost done now.
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Old 08-17-2003, 10:15 PM
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Old 08-17-2003, 10:37 PM
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Looks good so far. Keep up the good work.
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Old 08-17-2003, 11:16 PM
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looks cute !
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Old 08-17-2003, 11:18 PM
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Thanks guys I finished the water and now im working on some ther stuff liek the dark grass connecting to the sand and sand is finished basicly dirt with a light contrast.ahh shortcuts.....
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Old 08-18-2003, 01:17 AM
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Thanks guys I finished the water and now im working on some ther stuff liek the dark grass connecting to the sand and sand is finished basicly dirt with a light contrast.ahh shortcuts.....
Heh, someone else uses that account. Or at least they did.
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Old 08-18-2003, 03:19 AM
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It's alright. I'd like to see more though ;o
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Old 08-18-2003, 03:47 AM
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Re: Tile Set

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Hey for all of you who dont know I finally registerd on the forums Here is a tile set I made for zenkou please give me tips on how I can improve it.Or just tell me how much it sucks or how much you like it. any way just reply...

-Delta aka Tony Rivers


Edit: This is not the complete Tile set.I just started making this last night =P
Can you make a small screen with the tiles being used? I'd like to see them actually tiled together. They look nice though, although the grass seems a little too speckled for my taste... kinda looks spraypainted or something. I also agree that the mushroom looks like an arrow... maybe give it some dark outlines and a highlight point on the mushroom cap to make it stick out from the grass a bit more... Usually mushrooms stand from the grass, especially short grass.
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Old 08-18-2003, 04:23 AM
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Thanks for the tips I would post a screen but im completly ignorant and I dont know how to get my tiles into the game. I will say this I always make shure my tiles dont have any very ugly errors so I copy and paste them up and down to check.Also I did some more work and here is more tiles.Oh btw I didnt get around to fixing mushrooms yet but I will.

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Old 08-18-2003, 04:34 AM
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The water looks a bit fuzzy, I say. o_O
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Old 08-18-2003, 04:45 AM
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Thanks for the tips I would post a screen but im completly ignorant and I dont know how to get my tiles into the game. I will say this I always make shure my tiles dont have any very ugly errors so I copy and paste them up and down to check.Also I did some more work and here is more tiles.Oh btw I didnt get around to fixing mushrooms yet but I will.

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Mmm...The water leans a little bit too much to purple. It's alright though. I just think it could look nicer.
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Old 08-18-2003, 04:46 AM
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Yeah I cant get the water texture down very well and I didnt just want to have a blank blue square...
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Old 08-18-2003, 05:23 AM
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Take a look at my addtiledef2 tutorial to get it into the tileset.
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Old 08-18-2003, 07:02 AM
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The shading is fine. Only thing is all graal looks like a cliche of one another. Try giving it blades and make it look un-flat, other than that I like it.
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Old 08-19-2003, 05:01 AM
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The grass tiles are so-so... looks more like some kind of bumpy green surface. I sugest making the highlights in the grass more line-ish to give an illusion of blades... the mushroom seems fine, althought it could be rounded out a tad....
I hate the beach and water tiles. The water's color looks like if you swim in it your skin will be burned off... A solid color (cept where the depth changes) would actualy do better than the texture. For the water, some kind of gradient would be better, if you want to make a convincing illusion of water.
I dislike the beach tiles, because its a bad contrast to what it looks like you are trying to aim for.

Also, it looks like you use a airbrush tool for most of the textures. You're not using it enough. The sand doesn't look grainy enough, although the soil almost looks right.

If you're using a 'shop' program to do the airbrushing, I sugest you increase the dencity of the brush for the water and add shadows here and there for it. If you're using *shrudder* ms paint, then I feel sorry for you, and what you've made is then actualy failry good considering what you have to work with.
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Old 08-19-2003, 11:30 AM
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If you're using *shrudder* ms paint, then I feel sorry for you, and what you've made is then actualy failry good considering what you have to work with.
That's strange, ive made a few nice tilesets using MS Paint. It seems the people who aren't good at using MS Paint like to say bad stuff about it. Oh well.

I agree about the water, it looks like radioactive waste ran into it or something.
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Old 08-19-2003, 11:57 AM
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*shrudder* ms paint, then I feel sorry for you, and what you've made is then actualy failry good considering what you have to work with.

you can do a lot in paint. :O
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Old 08-19-2003, 08:30 PM
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WOW....well everyone else seems to think its fine but the beach tiles have been bothering me im going to change them some I did use the air brush in psp to make the soil then I changed the contrast and made it sand lol but I will add somemore grains I tried to make the water like eras water sort of but screwd it up im gonna fix it thoughand add soem sea shells and stuff like tiny rocks.
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Old 08-19-2003, 10:44 PM
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It's nice
But the mushrooms are too "pointy" still 8/10
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Old 09-18-2003, 07:33 AM
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