Level

[TripleE]

Im kinda new at levels I dont make them much but this morning I got bored. Tell me what you think. I know I need lot's of improvement so give me anything that would help.Or just flame my style. Either way have fun rating this.I worked on the house the most. I think it looks good. I know the river is crappy,but I am not good at making cliff things.It would be more interesting if my clifs were jagged.

[amonrabr]

need some improvements, but its ok

[Spark910]

Yes it is good, as your new to levels. Oaky dokey, here goes...

Grass Detail:
You have got the general idea here. Its just you need to have more of it, as its very thinly layered, and so, there are gaps which makes it look boring. So try and clump it a bit more together, and then look at other tiles on the tileset...
See Blue Box In Screenshot

Trees:
The trees work a lot better in sections together. So instead of single ones placed together, make a collection of a few, that way it actually saves some level space.
See Red Box In Screenshot

River:
Yes you were correct about this. It looks a bit boring if its all the same thing. But what you could have done it edit it slightly so it looks better (the water) with a few rocks. But if not, try a jaggered one.
See Green Box In Screenshot

Path:
Nice little water thing on the path, you should have used that a bit more, as its effective and works well...
Anyhow, there are many tiles for a path, you should try and use them all.
See Yellow Box In Screenshot

Overall:
Not bad! Don’t be put off if you look at the screenshot and think ''I’m never going to be able to do that'' if you would like the LEVEL then IM me on: ''spark911pwa'' then you can fully see which tiles are used... Keep it up, look at my comments and wait for some more. But everyone starts off with a not so good level, it takes time, but I know you will get there.

Beginner Rating: 7/10

[TripleE]

Originally posted by Spark910
Yes it is good, as your new to levels. Oaky dokey, here goes...

Grass Detail:
You have got the general idea here. Its just you need to have more of it, as its very thinly layered, and so, there are gaps which makes it look boring. So try and clump it a bit more together, and then look at other tiles on the tileset...
See Blue Box In Screenshot

Trees:
The trees work a lot better in sections together. So instead of single ones placed together, make a collection of a few, that way it actually saves some level space.
See Red Box In Screenshot

River:
Yes you were correct about this. It looks a bit boring if its all the same thing. But what you could have done it edit it slightly so it looks better (the water) with a few rocks. But if not, try a jaggered one.
See Green Box In Screenshot

Path:
Nice little water thing on the path, you should have used that a bit more, as its effective and works well...
Anyhow, there are many tiles for a path, you should try and use them all.
See Yellow Box In Screenshot

Overall:
Not bad! Don’t be put off if you look at the screenshot and think ''I’m never going to be able to do that'' if you would like the LEVEL then IM me on: ''spark911pwa'' then you can fully see which tiles are used... Keep it up, look at my comments and wait for some more. But everyone starts off with a not so good level, it takes time, but I know you will get there.

Beginner Rating: 7/10

Well, Thanks for those pointers. I have trouble make the water. I cant find certain things,tiles...so when I try to make the river on the path it looks weird.Il message you on AIM sometime though. Thanks.