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Old 11-08-2002, 03:26 AM
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well...take a look

Ok this is the level I was gonna submit to the contest but since it's off I guess I'll just post it here.
It's just something I worked on in my spare time I didn't have a lot of time though I've been sick all week

bah well here it is
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Old 11-08-2002, 08:47 AM
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i like it alot actually, backpals are evil though.....7.5/10
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Old 11-08-2002, 09:17 AM
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thnx...
i know i don't like backpals either but when i put it on UnholyNation to test some stuff seteffect wasn't working online, so i had to use setbackpal
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Old 11-09-2002, 03:56 AM
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nice work there Paradox


one of the better levels ive seen 7/10


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Old 11-09-2002, 11:43 AM
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9/10 nice
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Old 11-09-2002, 12:07 PM
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I think you need to cut back on the water stones a bit.
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Old 11-09-2002, 07:11 PM
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Ive never got this, why do bushes have really BRIGHT lights coming out of them, if your going to put lights, make them faint, just so it illuminates/shows up the bush.

Sparks Rating: 5.5/10

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Dont always have really bright lights! The white on house and green on bushes spoil it.

The water is good, less stones though, you can just have blank shallow water, I know it looks not as good, but it still is ok.

I think the swamp in bottom right is a bit messed up.

Maybe a little more grass detail.
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Old 11-09-2002, 07:22 PM
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Very nice.
Although I don't like the white light effects.
They seem too bright and don't fit in with the rest of the level.
Other than that it looks good.
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Old 11-09-2002, 10:59 PM
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Remove the lights from to bushes or make them much less blendy as Spark said.

The lights on the house at the bottom are also way to bright
you cant even see the lamp (if there is one)

On the little island make the light less blended there to

Else its a very nice level, Good job
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Old 11-10-2002, 12:15 AM
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Remove the lights period if you don't tame them down ;(
I always hated lights. I can't see them, so I never like them. I make good enough levels without them. So, yeah. o.O

Umm, other them the restarded lights, expecially light from bushes (wtf?) I rate it...... 7/10
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