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Old 09-26-2002, 10:18 PM
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Talking Outside house

Rate and comment this outside house I made, myself? I think it's decent, but that's probably because I like the style.
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Old 09-26-2002, 10:22 PM
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I don't like the water at all.
You should make it into walkable tiles and have the little windows as small doors and have the place where the water is as a balcony.
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Old 09-26-2002, 11:01 PM
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Remade it, take a look
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Old 09-27-2002, 12:43 AM
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Remade it, take a look
Looks better.
Try adding a little something to the back.
It looks to straight compared to the rest of the building.
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Old 09-27-2002, 12:59 AM
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Looks better.
Try adding a little something to the back.
It looks to straight compared to the rest of the building.
Ok I did, take a look at this
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Old 09-27-2002, 02:40 AM
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Ok I did, take a look at this
Come on I want some more comments
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Old 09-27-2002, 03:43 AM
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Nnice i like
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Old 09-27-2002, 03:45 AM
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Nnice i like
Thanks Now come on people, I want feedback on my current house skills :O

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Old 09-29-2002, 02:22 AM
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Thanks Now come on people, I want feedback on my current house skills :O

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I don't like it at all, The boarder looks terrible and the green hedge top looks bad too,
Don't use that block hege that your doing, looks bad
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Old 09-29-2002, 03:07 AM
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Hmm looks like a 2002 level 1 of those big houses...
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Old 09-29-2002, 03:26 AM
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Hmm looks like a 2002 level 1 of those big houses...
Now THAT is a good comment (i hope)
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A continuation of the village
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Now THAT is a good comment (i hope)
yUP ,AND YES IT LOOKS BETTER
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hmm add grass detail
add trees around that'll look good
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Old 09-29-2002, 05:24 AM
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yUP ,AND YES IT LOOKS BETTER
sOZ CAPS LOL
hmm add grass detail
add trees around that'll look good
Im actually working on that, and the trees fits in nicely but the detailing isnt done yet so I wont post it here, get on AIM and Ill show ya.
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Ok I did, take a look at this
Your house is tilted. The wooden poles go 1 less tile downward on the left, compared to the right hand side.

Also, I highly dislike the overall look of the house, probably mainly because of the use of the hedge (is it a hedge) tiles for the roof. I am quite reluctant to use those tiles, because of their black outline.
That outline has taken some of the "pzazz" away from you level.
4/10 - Even though I don't like it, it still is creative.
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Your house is tilted. The wooden poles go 1 less tile downward on the left, compared to the right hand side.

Also, I highly dislike the overall look of the house, probably mainly because of the use of the hedge (is it a hedge) tiles for the roof. I am quite reluctant to use those tiles, because of their black outline.
That outline has taken some of the "pzazz" away from you level.
4/10 - Even though I don't like it, it still is creative.
That does it , I will be seeing you after class Just kidding.
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Im actually working on that, and the trees fits in nicely but the detailing isnt done yet so I wont post it here, get on AIM and Ill show ya.
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yeh he hurt me mentally! (unclasified reasons....)...seya tonight Spunky!
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Old 09-29-2002, 03:38 PM
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carnt babysitting>.
yeh he hurt me mentally! (unclasified reasons....)...seya tonight Spunky!
Yeah, (wan, this time, YOU take the shotgun withyou, but hide it IN the trunk.)
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