Rate (my first level)

Dragona2002 · #1 05-11-2002, 03:15 PM

i meda this level in 10 mins

rate it plz

P-a-W-n · #2 05-11-2002, 03:19 PM

8, considering it only took you 10 minutes.

But I'm confused, how do you get to the chairs?

Or are you going to fix that later?

Spark910 · #3 05-11-2002, 05:18 PM

Not bad for first i suppose!
Well put detail in grass around the castle! Also only use ONE door img (Gate w/e) not too bad:

6/10

someone99 · #4 05-11-2002, 06:19 PM

2/10, you used the basic generator, its undetailed, and looks like total crap.

I bet the 10 minute thing is just an excuse to cover up that it just really sucks badly.

Falcor · #5 05-11-2002, 07:16 PM

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Originally posted by someone99
2/10, you used the basic generator, its undetailed, and looks like total crap.

I bet the 10 minute thing is just an excuse to cover up that it just really sucks badly.

You don't know this. What is your problem when people post sucky levels you almost take it to a personal level?

someone99 · #6 05-11-2002, 07:20 PM

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Originally posted by Falcor

You don't know this. What is your problem when people post sucky levels you almost take it to a personal level?

I dunno. But there is a few things I dont like to see in levels; one is combined pathways, the other is the "I made this in (such and such) amount of time", I have a few more too but I cant think of them off the top of my head.

haunter · #7 05-12-2002, 12:29 AM

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Originally posted by someone99

one is combined pathways,

That signifies different depths in the "hole" in the ground...

and your level ain't too pretty, jazz up the path, add more detail, add maybe a tree clump, make the path acctually go off the edge of the screen so you can connect thre level to somewhere, take out 2 of those gates, make it so you can sit in the chairs...

GrappaRoo · #8 05-12-2002, 05:40 AM

If you're going to change the perspective like that on the front wall, it might help to do it on the back wall as well.

But, otherwise, good effort.

RavenTelvecho · #9 05-12-2002, 05:51 AM

5.5 for first.

haunter · #10 05-12-2002, 08:08 AM

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Originally posted by GrappaRoo
If you're going to change the perspective like that on the front wall, it might help to do it on the back wall as well. But, otherwise, good effort.

Heh, i noticed that afterwards

someone99 · #11 05-12-2002, 03:09 PM

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Originally posted by haunter

That signifies different depths in the "hole" in the ground...

and your level ain't too pretty, jazz up the path, add more detail, add maybe a tree clump, make the path acctually go off the edge of the screen so you can connect thre level to somewhere, take out 2 of those gates, make it so you can sit in the chairs...

Well, I hate to resort to the same image over and over, but here is an example of what I mean.

And it looks more like a tile error than different depths, cause both are completely different styles...

Dragona2002 · #12 05-12-2002, 07:59 PM

people there are warps to the right and left of the castle
to go to the chairs ; )

MysticZhadow · #13 05-15-2002, 12:18 AM

i don't even have a level gen... lol

draygin · #14 05-15-2002, 01:02 AM

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Originally posted by someone99

Well, I hate to resort to the same image over and over, but here is an example of what I mean.

And it looks more like a tile error than different depths, cause both are completely different styles...

Level making is nothing but one mass of tile errors any time you use a tile. Its personal preference on wether you think it looks good or bad. I've seen a good mixture of those tiles and bad mixtures.

haunter · #15 05-15-2002, 01:50 AM

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Originally posted by draygin

Level making is nothing but one mass of tile errors any time you use a tile. Its personal preference on wether you think it looks good or bad. I've seen a good mixture of those tiles and bad mixtures.

Exactly, when i look at that, i see different detphs, the same what when i see the "DEEPEST" water tiles in say, a lake, it looks like a big blocking blue thing instead of deeper water...

Zolrieg · #16 05-15-2002, 03:06 AM

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Originally posted by haunter

Exactly, when i look at that, i see different detphs, the same what when i see the "DEEPEST" water tiles in say, a lake, it looks like a big blocking blue thing instead of deeper water...

*slaps you*

kenyonandelliot · #17 05-15-2002, 09:49 PM

Its pretty good. I think those 3 gates shouldn't be there so leave 1 and it will probaly look better

haunter · #18 05-15-2002, 10:43 PM

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Originally posted by Zolrieg

*slaps you*

Ow... im sorry... *gives cookie* will you forgive me?

osrs · #19 05-19-2002, 04:08 PM

Normal level, i can make in 5 minuts, add more things..
more Grass...ect..
The level need to be Original, nice and be "fun"..
but congtulations..