Renegade : Review

Psyker · #1 12-19-2001, 03:56 AM

Here is my second (sigh) review of Renegade.

- The intro is nice, however you may want to change the yellow light effects. It collides with the white font, and it kinda messes around with your eyes. :o After you walk throught he door, you magically fall into a cavern, where Scythe is. Now, I don't know how you got into the throne room into the first place, or how you'd be able to exit it.

At least you have a storyline.

- The door warps are horrendous, and instantly warp you into the middle of the next room. Fix them, please.

- Classes? :o There are three classes, human, birdo, and bomy. First off, classes are boring and unoriginal. Second of all, you put bomies in.

However, the birdos are pleasant but a tad buggy. In whatever direction you aim in, you always attack down.
Fix the transparency on the ghost birdo, and fix up the images they change into.

- There are many stupid mistakes, such as putting bright yellow lights (

) in daytime, and putting a chicken in the middle of nowhere without anything around it to support as to why it's there.

- There are few tile errors, however the level content is plain and unoriginal. Please add more detail.

- There are few NPCs to interact with.

Renegade's status : Failed

wark2 · #2 12-19-2001, 04:14 AM

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Originally posted by Psyker
Here is my second (sigh) review of Renegade.

- The intro is nice, however you may want to change the yellow light effects. It collides with the white font, and it kinda messes around with your eyes. :o After you walk throught he door, you magically fall into a cavern, where Scythe is. Now, I don't know how you got into the throne room into the first place, or how you'd be able to exit it. At least you have a storyline.

- The door warps are horrendous, and instantly warp you into the middle of the next room. Fix them, please.

- Classes? :o There are three classes, human, birdo, and bomy. First off, classes are boring and unoriginal. Second of all, you put bomies in. However, the birdos are pleasant but a tad buggy. In whatever direction you aim in, you always attack down.
Fix the transparency on the ghost birdo, and fix up the images they change into.

- There are many stupid mistakes, such as putting bright yellow lights () in daytime, and putting a chicken in the middle of nowhere without anything around it to support as to why it's there.

- There are few tile errors, however the level content is plain and unoriginal. Please add more detail.

- There are few NPCs to interact with.

Renegade's status : Failed

Psyker, whats the record for most FAILS? lol

Brad_Elven · #3 12-19-2001, 04:43 AM

I gotta review Manatra 2001 soon. I will try to get it done tonight and if I cant then I will do it tommorow or something. Its hard cuz I got exams all week

wark2 · #4 12-19-2001, 04:45 AM

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Originally posted by Brad_Elven
I gotta review Manatra 2001 soon. I will try to get it done tonight and if I cant then I will do it tommorow or something. Its hard cuz I got exams all week

yeah I know what you mean, I have exams like every day..

SSRobgeta · #5 12-19-2001, 05:07 AM

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Originally posted by Psyker
Here is my second (sigh) review of Renegade.

- The intro is nice, however you may want to change the yellow light effects. It collides with the white font, and it kinda messes around with your eyes. :o After you walk throught he door, you magically fall into a cavern, where Scythe is. Now, I don't know how you got into the throne room into the first place, or how you'd be able to exit it. At least you have a storyline.

- The door warps are horrendous, and instantly warp you into the middle of the next room. Fix them, please.

- Classes? :o There are three classes, human, birdo, and bomy. First off, classes are boring and unoriginal. Second of all, you put bomies in. However, the birdos are pleasant but a tad buggy. In whatever direction you aim in, you always attack down.
Fix the transparency on the ghost birdo, and fix up the images they change into.

- There are many stupid mistakes, such as putting bright yellow lights () in daytime, and putting a chicken in the middle of nowhere without anything around it to support as to why it's there.

- There are few tile errors, however the level content is plain and unoriginal. Please add more detail.

- There are few NPCs to interact with.

Renegade's status : Failed

I didnm't send Renegade really to much for a Review but to see what you think. And it would help for you to explain more.

Brad_Elven · #6 12-19-2001, 08:43 AM

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Originally posted by SSRobgeta

I didnm't send Renegade really to much for a Review but to see what you think. And it would help for you to explain more.

i will help u then...it sucks =/

Slaktmaster · #7 12-19-2001, 02:48 PM

Well, keep working. At least you were getting somewhere. My server had really good levels but I grew tired of it even before I finished 50 (100 % hand crafted) levels for the outside.

The server had 130 levels after three weeks.

James · #8 12-19-2001, 10:19 PM

Bah, why send servers in just to see what they think, you are wasting the PW testers time, send it in when it's actually done and nice.

SSRobgeta · #9 12-20-2001, 03:36 AM

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Originally posted by James
Bah, why send servers in just to see what they think, you are wasting the PW testers time, send it in when it's actually done and nice.

Ok thats what me and Jeice are gonna do now I guess.

Psyker · #10 12-20-2001, 04:25 AM

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Originally posted by James
Bah, why send servers in just to see what they think, you are wasting the PW testers time, send it in when it's actually done and nice.

I wish they would tell me that.

SSRobgeta · #11 12-20-2001, 07:28 PM

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Originally posted by Psyker

I wish they would tell me that.

Psyker, over Christmas Break me and Jeice are gonna try to finish up most of the blank levels. And if we think it is really close to being done, we will send in. See you then.