Please CHeckout My Outside Level

IceFire_TK · #1 12-21-2001, 08:22 PM

Please rate my level, and tell me how I can improve it(It's not the best, I realize. But it's not THAT bad...)

WoRlaNN2k · #2 12-21-2001, 09:37 PM

Err.... it looks a little plain... add more stuff, and get rid of that "tree" house, it doesn't look right

IceFire_TK · #3 12-21-2001, 09:41 PM

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Originally posted by WoRlaNN2k
Err.... it looks a little plain... add more stuff, and get rid of that "tree" house, it doesn't look right

Make an outside level, then show me. It is kind of "plain" but add more stuff? WTF? That would look even stupider. It would be too crowed. Make a level then show me how to do this then.

haunter · #4 12-21-2001, 10:26 PM

Add some mushrooms or tree sprouts to the grass. That tree house looks horrible ( =-\ ) Your paths are too straight, that "box" of dirt the table is on is too square (note the word "box") and there are too may wave tiles in the water, take some out, and also add some of the other kind of wave tiles. Oh, and maybe make the coast not so straight?

zell12 · #5 12-21-2001, 11:17 PM

-er- yea... :o

-_Soulhunter_- · #6 12-22-2001, 12:04 AM

Things to change:
*Take away or change the tree house becuase it's wierd
*Add some more grass and flower tiles
*Make the road a bit "crooky".. not so straight

vovavziggy · #7 12-22-2001, 12:20 AM

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Originally posted by IceFire_TK

Make an outside level, then show me. It is kind of "plain" but add more stuff? WTF? That would look even stupider. It would be too crowed. Make a level then show me how to do this then.

If you don't accept criticism, don't ask for advice.

Kumada · #8 12-22-2001, 02:13 AM

Make the paths more (ridgid?) let me get an example..

Kumada · #9 12-22-2001, 02:20 AM

Heres an example.. From one of my levels on Trimaris

lordhelmut · #10 12-22-2001, 06:37 AM

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Originally posted by Kumada
Heres an example.. From one of my levels on Trimaris

thats a nice example. make nicer grass patterns, use that trail advice and make the cliff jagged

sac · #11 12-23-2001, 05:57 AM

too plain and the dirt path is like too straight

Faheria_LAT1 · #12 12-23-2001, 06:25 AM

That level is plain and the house between two trees completely ruins the level

yoshee15 · #13 12-23-2001, 12:05 PM

that just makes me feel dirty

Qwert616 · #14 12-23-2001, 12:10 PM

Well, everyone pretty much said it but, the dirt path and the coast is way to straight. The tree house is not right at all, etc

IceFire_TK · #15 12-24-2001, 08:06 AM

I don't like level making that much...And making a jagged road takes too long and I am not a very good tiler

If i did that, it would look like Frolic