(Era) Level's

littlekinky · #1 08-25-2011, 10:33 PM

An era levels, i was creating the building on the right, from the buildings left of spar on the game. Was trying to create something a bit better, and forgive the no images, some reason i have about 10 era images in the folder?

Feedback please

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Emera · #2 08-25-2011, 10:34 PM

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Originally Posted by littlekinky

An era levels, i was creating the building on the right, from the buildings left of spar on the game. Was trying to create something a bit better, and forgive the no images, some reason i have about 10 era images in the folder?

Feedback please

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I love it!

littlekinky · #3 08-25-2011, 10:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Emera

I love it!

Thank you Emera.

Emera · #4 08-25-2011, 10:37 PM

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Originally Posted by littlekinky

Thank you Emera.

No problem kinky!

littlekinky · #5 08-25-2011, 10:42 PM

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No problem kinky!

Please call me Lewis

smirt362 · #6 08-25-2011, 10:44 PM

I like the shape, maybe extend it back a bit. Top part seems kinda thin.

Emera · #7 08-25-2011, 10:45 PM

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Please call me Lewis

Yes lewis! Good job lewis!

littlekinky · #8 08-25-2011, 10:49 PM

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Originally Posted by smirt362

I like the shape, maybe extend it back a bit. Top part seems kinda thin.

Agreed, Top layer of the house back is a bit thin, try this.
Also modified the steps abit, they didn't seem correct.

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callimuc · #9 08-26-2011, 12:11 AM

Your parking stripes are.... so changed. Just make one line

Supaman771 · #10 08-26-2011, 12:50 AM

Top two aren't bad, I agree the extended roof is better.

Parking spots; what calli said.
Bottom building; extremely random.. don't much like it.
Doorways; too short, doors are 3x4 tiles, not 3x3.

littlekinky · #11 08-26-2011, 01:18 AM

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Originally Posted by Supaman771

Top two aren't bad, I agree the extended roof is better.

Parking spots; what calli said.
Bottom building; extremely random.. don't much like it.
Doorways; too short, doors are 3x4 tiles, not 3x3.

Totally agree what you said, looking back now your right. And it was mainly to play around with the hut style roof.

Cheers man

Tricxta · #12 08-26-2011, 05:06 AM

Extending on the issues listed by the others I don't think that window idea where its offset and is merging into the roof is working too well since its making the walls look really blocky. Other then that I really like the majority of this level, it has a really nice clean feel to it. Well done!