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Old 09-15-2001, 11:36 AM
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Feed back on my levels...

Tell me what you think & what I can do to make them better

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Old 09-15-2001, 11:37 AM
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Old 09-15-2001, 12:22 PM
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levels

first i like, i saw just a few errors.
second one i didnt like cause its just to normal not to much detail.

there both good though
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Old 09-15-2001, 12:22 PM
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way too plain
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Old 09-15-2001, 12:25 PM
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The first one was okay, the second was is too plain.
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Old 09-15-2001, 09:15 PM
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the first was..ok
and you can delete the second
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Old 09-15-2001, 11:33 PM
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The first level looked pretty good.
Although it looks like you didn't quite use enough variations of tiles to fill in the grass though
Other than the grass thing, excellent level.

The second level was waay to plain.
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Old 09-16-2001, 04:00 AM
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Your average levels nothing too special
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Old 09-16-2001, 04:30 AM
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First one is ok, 2nd one too plain, spend alot of time on your levels and add alot of detail. But then again you're guild admin and not expected to be a 1337 level maker
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Old 09-16-2001, 07:11 AM
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first one was excellent the second was good but make ir not so original
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Old 09-16-2001, 07:12 AM
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Ok thx I will have to work more on the second one...uhm will some one go in on the first one & circle all of my title errors pls
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Old 09-16-2001, 07:20 AM
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#1 is very good.
#2.. looks kind of like Moonlit Lake.
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Old 09-17-2001, 02:28 PM
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I like them both, they're good.
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Old 09-19-2001, 04:05 PM
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Old 09-19-2001, 07:35 PM
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The First one kix ass.. a couple tile errors but everyone has tile errors...
the second one needs more detail add a table with chairs or sumthin.. more bushs too
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Old 09-19-2001, 11:38 PM
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First one is pretty good...and the second is good also. Simple yes, but so is Zol's Pub...yes Zol's was made a long time ago, but simplicity is still good....though nowadays NPCs are necessary for something like a pub.
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Old 09-22-2001, 08:12 PM
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I wish Zol still had his banner like thing where he would shoot nick and Azreal and Mandi would be there...

Also, my opinion is I don't like using green stones as path ways.
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Old 09-22-2001, 08:39 PM
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I think they are both great. But, in the 2nd one, I would take out the moon and maybe make add a Light Effect for it and maybe add alot of Light Effects over it. But, other then that, Perfect.
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