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Old 11-05-2012, 06:33 PM
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sixty, I'm gonna do you a solid and just explain this out to you.

You need to make your sentences more coherent and understandable for him to process your report so he may be able to fix the problem, instead of what has happened here, ending up with you being unhappy, you can avoid this by explaining the most you can of what is wrong, hypothetical example below:

"Okay, I have two problems I wish to report, first being that whenever I walk into the events house, It keeps saying failed in the corner and I get warped randomly into the black area of the level, secondly, whenever I purchase a flash grenade, I end up getting three sticky bombs, I should also mention that when I get the events house error, I was running inside and outside pretty quickly. Can you please help me and explain to me what is going on?"

Notice how I did the following,

1. I stated the problem areas, which are the obvious first step to getting these things identified as problems.

2. I then mentioned what was wrong with these topics of the report, that being whenever I would enter the events house, for an unknown reason to myself, I was being unexpectedly warped to a random part of the level, usually inaccessible by normal means and getting a "failed" error text message in the corner of my screen, then I even mentioned some extra information to help solidify my report with any possible reason for said problem. I also did things similarly with the purchase of flash grenades, I ended up mentioning that I was getting the wrong product, on top of that I was also getting more product then I should've been given.

Now giving the problem in a clear, understandable paragraph, whoever reads my report will be able to go through my problem that much quicker because it is easier to process. If you openly admit you aren't capable of explaining the problem, maybe having someone else do it for you would be more helpful to you, hopefully one day Era comes out with a hooked on phonics program for those less fortunate or in need.
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