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Old 05-27-2012, 04:09 AM
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Oh wow Bayne.

The Beach:
the beach is wayyyy too straight, try adding some detail to it, make it less repetitive. Same with the shallow/deep water. Add a little detail, and some spunk to it. You know, spruce it up.

The Cliffs:
Again, repetitive. Everything is too straight, and happens over and over again. Try changing directions a bit more often.

I'm not a professional leveler, but that is my advice to you.
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