[TonyRivers]

A few things I noticed:

1. For a vamp lord he sure looks ghetto I would expect a huge cape with lots of folds and a bunch of fancy details maybe ornate armor and some decent boots. Instead we have a guy wearing what seems to be an old hand-me-down for a shirt and boots that look like the came out of a bad 80's movie.

2. with his puny arms he would never be able to hoist that mammoth sword/axe over his shoulder. however if for some reason he managed to accomplish this act he would be hunched over like he were lifting weights.

3. the folds on his pants are cool but 2 places they look very off.

4. his left chest muscle is a bit square and lopsided.

5. the expression on his face is dull for a vamp lord he should be vicious or something. Instead he appears to be a very laid back vampire lord looking like hes not real sure what is going on and he couldnt care less.

6. the sword does not look like it would work very well it is too big and clumbsy. I bet if he got in a fight he couldnt gather enough strenght to make a decent swing at his oponent.

7. the shoulder guard looks out of place. What is supporting it? seems to me its just magicly stuck there.

Over all not bad I like the shading and the pose isnt bad but it just dosnt fit the role of a vampire lord it seems more like a bandit or ranger or something.