
12-01-2003, 09:22 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Pittsburgh, United States
Posts: 111
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Starting at the top and going down......
The house is too blockish (if there is such a thing). The pathway leading to the mountain side hurts my eyes x.x. The "stairs" or bridge or so going up the side of the mountain is too bulky and out of place. The grass could be detailed better. Too many random tiles placed all over. I like how you mixed the grass on dirt tiles with each other. BUT you did not do a good job of it. I like doing this also sometimes, but you need to know where to mix them at. I don't know what the dark blob of dirt is supposed to be... NICE job of the cliffs. Not many people can use them as you did here. I like how it sticks out. The latter going up the mountain is nice. But once you reach the bottom you find that ugly path again which leads to even "ugly-er" house. Scrap the house completely x.x Nice use of the grass on dirt tiles in the bottom right hand corner though.
You could fix this level up. You would not have to change the cliff much which is a good start. The rest is kinda iffy....
I give this level a rating of :
4.4034 out of 10.00 possible points.
Summary:
good start with the cliff tiles. The rest of the level can use some work though. |
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