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Old 11-12-2003, 01:41 PM
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Okay:

1. I do not like the houses. They just don't look right.

2. The bridge going south to north is alright (Yet where I have maked the blue circles in the attachment you could fix that up with placeing grass around that area. But the bridge going west to east doesnt look right. looks more like a jetty comming off the cliff.

3. Where I have put an X I just don't like that.. it look out of place.

4. I have marked a few little red circles around the place. What they are is tiles that are spose to slot into the cliff top area.

5. The cliffing it self is alright, (Yet I aint a great cliffer myself) But the shading looks a little off on the north side of things. Also at one point on the cliffing you added the wrong bottem. (You placed a sand bottom instead of a grass one)

6. Take a couple of the group mushrooms out too.

7. The house to the north of the level.. the roof of the green bush needs the corners put in.

I think the levels has potential.


Rating: 4/10
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