
11-09-2003, 01:46 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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I love the way you use graphics to improove the level.
Note the Bush on a stick type thingy at the bottom left. And although the hanging green things have been overdone, it still improoves the overall feel of the level.
Also note the sweet use of light effects. I guess it's teh fact that dim lighting was used, but it actually is easy on your eyes and improoves the feel of the level.
Problems:
Bottom Left, see the brown fence thing, it cuts into the grass and into the shading. It can be easily removed, and replaced witha graphic to make it look alot better. Same is on bottom right.
Improovements:
Improove on the cliffs somehow, I see that you are able to disconnect them, so make a ledge type thing for the waterfall.
Improove water by adding a lillypod or something.
Rating: 9/10 (Very Good Level, but can still be improoved) |
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