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Old 09-29-2003, 05:30 PM
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I have to say I really like this level. It's a nice change of pace of all the boring grass levels I see.

I'm only going to comment on tiling.

The bridge doesnt match the perspective of the overall level. It appears to be a straight top view while everything else is slanted. Maybe you can see a post or two where it connects to the cliffs? I also recommend hanging the tiles to give it a slanted look. Example. The bottom bar for the bridge should be the same type as the top one to give it a slanted look.

The path tiles in the bottom right look messy in the big open area. Maybe filling it in a bit more with path tiles so it doesnt look like a bunch of veins.

I recommend strategically placing a red rock or two here and there in the level for more detailing. Not necessarily a lot but one or two could enhance it.

I recommmend taking out one or two of the waves in the small part. It makes it look cluttered and awkward. taking out 2 of the big ones should fix it.

All in all a very well done level and primarily error free. I'd say about an 8 our of ten. With a few very minor changes I'd probably bump that up to a 9.

once again thats the level rating with out lights.
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