
08-10-2003, 02:37 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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It can be better 0.o
1. The Colors are too light, you'll never find colors like that on a pouch.
2. You amde it look fat by adding so much light at the top. Reduce the light to make it more roundish, thus full.
3. In an addition to the above post it looks like someone put a pile of sh*t in it. No this isn't a diss in any manner, niether was it intended that way. I just have a strange imagination 0.o.
4. Make the pouch opening more round. It looks flat. Basically you have to darw the other side.
5. Cheese, ear it! |
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