[Spark910]

I´ll go off the last image you posted!

House
Okay the shape of the house is good. I like the little pillar type things, however it still looks plain. To me this looks like a graal2001 level. So maybe some of those tree vines. If not, make the shape more interesting with a side room maybe.

Floor
Florr is good. I like the gold on the red. However, I would have done a bit more with the floor. Maybe a few dirt specs, or something to break up the same pattern. Maybe... hm.. castle stairs floor top thingy.

Objects
I think the whole level would be better if you added less NPCs and more objects from tiles. Have a look what there is. Tiles can often look better as they fill the level more.

Overall
Overall its good. Its too hot to think here in spain! And its brief as I have 7mins left on the clock on my internet cafe time =(

So improove it by adding more tiles objects. Look at the shape and the floor again. And then I think its all okay. btw nice pattern on the floor.