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Originally posted by konidias
Okay, here is my list:
1) Why are there pieces of carpet all over the wood floor? That's hideous and it really isn't very realistic. It kinda looks like a blue virus is eating up the floor... or there was a flood of square water...
2) To the right (viewer's right) of the door, the wall bends a lot. Why? This has absolutely no structural purpose, and would be extremely idiotic to build into a room. "Gee I know, lets make this wall fold like a vertical staircase and make the insides even smaller!" You have it in the bottom left corner too... I mean, wtf is it?
3) You did the same thing to the bottom right table... plus whoever has to sit there must have to jump over their desk in order to get to their chair... Also, the desk with two registers (I think they are registers?) on it, shouldn't have that skinny area (below the blue trascan) I mean the rest of the table is a lot wider than that, it just looks retarded to have it all as one table. Why is there a microphone halfway on a plant? Is the room bugged?
4) Finally, in the big computer room, why do you have the chairs in odd positions? Like for example, you have this major triple monitor thing in the middle of the desk, but no chair in front of it. You should move the farthest chair to the left, over one tile, so it's in front of the monitors better, and take out the two middle chairs, and put on in the middle of the big triple monitor.
5) the ammo doesn't really fit on the shelves... I hope you noticed that though...
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1) Yeah I didnt like that too much. It can look good, i'll remake it later.
2) Its a wall. Well a graal wall. I was bored of just striaght walls. (lol edits it from what it was before, if you were quick you saw what it said)
3) Who said its a table? Work surfaces are perfectly buyable and useable and I have seen many shops with thin > thick bits.
4) Eras GFX, and anyway they are slightly to the right of they keyboards, my chair is like that now.
5) Yeah I did, its the tile size, image size and me only bothering to correct it to .5
And the bottom right desk. There could be a door on the right.