more shading X_X it looks really bad shading wise cept for pants i know i must sound like a living anus saying this but i'd redo the shading and pick a place where the light is comming from like when you sketch so it look better and yeah...i think thats it o yeah the club is a little lob sided try and make it a little more smoother X_X man i just basically told you to re do the whole thing damn i hate myself
