[Spark910]

Quick review as im tired...

Level One:

I honestly wouldn't use them mushrooms! It blocks the players and so its an anoyance.

Secondly the water works quite well how there is deep water by the cliffs, but the very shallow water (light-blue) is too boring and dull, maybe add a stip of grass down there.

Thirdly, the grass around the tree is a bit blank, so shove some detail in there.

Last of all, the grass, dont use half of the long grass, it doesn't look nice by its self. SO full or nothing would be my suggestion.

Sparks Rating: 4/10
-Reason for this is, its not a full level, and needs improving.

Level Two:

I'll start with the path. Its a bit boring, there are [i]three[/b] dirt tiles mainly used, as well as two rocks! So there are 5 tiles to use. So spread the tiles out a bit more, and dont use groups of tiles in patches, it doesnt look as good.

Some of the grass needs detailing and the swamp needs to work, the grass needs more depth and intrest to it (short swamp, light green square off the village walkway)

Water could just do with a jazz up as there are big parts of the same color, which gets boring, so odd specks of deep dark-blue water or some more waves! 0_0

Sparks Rating: 5/10
-Reason for this is, its not a full level, its better than the last, but once again there are blank spots for improvement.