The storyline is okay, but it could use some elaboration and is a bit clichéd. Playerworlds that use that "you are the hero" element don't really work out, because there should be other players there too, meaning you're not really
the one. You should modify it and base it more on some interaction between players, unless of course, you guys are planning on keep your current staff/player ratio.
I also think that it's time to let old Bravo rest, its inevitable death has been prolonged for far too long. The people who want it back are yearning for a time past, and the levels alone won't bring that era back. All that having those levels online now does is bring down the quality of the world. Bravo Online is obviously not the same playerworld it was four or five years ago, and you shouldn’t be trying to make it as such.
As for the levels, I was hoping to see something new, but whatever. The only screens that have really impressed me are those of Scrawby, but the rest I'd say are barely above average. While they're not necessarily bad, I would have hoped for something in a much higher league. I really don’t feel up to critiquing them now, but quite frankly, it should be apparent to you guys what’s wrong with them and what needs to be improved. Do it.
And about
this level, do you have an explanation as to why the rocks are glowing?