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Old 02-13-2003, 05:19 AM
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Quote:
Originally posted by Mustang1988


Okay, since you want to mock him, I will mock you.
  • "ok" should be "OK".
  • There should be a comma after "ok".
  • "sense" should be "since."
  • "u" should be "you."
  • "grammer" should be "grammar."
  • Should have a period after "expert".
  • "its" should be "it's."
  • Should only have one space between "its" and "weren't".
  • Should have a comma after "weren't".
  • "its" should be "it's."
  • Should have a comma after "I've".
  • "yea" is not a word, but if it was, it would have a comma after it.
  • Unless you were going for sarcasm (which if it were, it would not be a very good try), there should be a period after "friends," not a question mark.
  • "that's" should be capitalized.
  • Technically, "internet" should be capitalized, but I'll let that one pass.
  • Could use a comma after "all day".
  • Should have a period after "know".

Oh, and by the way: How do you know he is on the internet all day? Or was that another attempt at sarcasm?

Ok, I'm done.
All I can say is, OWNED
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