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Originally posted by Genesis
ok sense u want to be the grammer expert
its weren't
and its I've
and yea I do have friends?
that's why I'm not on the internet all day like someone I know
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Okay, since you want to mock him, I will mock you.
- "ok" should be "OK".
- There should be a comma after "ok".
- "sense" should be "since."
- "u" should be "you."
- "grammer" should be "grammar."
- Should have a period after "expert".
- "its" should be "it's."
- Should only have one space between "its" and "weren't".
- Should have a comma after "weren't".
- "its" should be "it's."
- Should have a comma after "I've".
- "yea" is not a word, but if it was, it would have a comma after it.
- Unless you were going for sarcasm (which if it were, it would not be a very good try), there should be a period after "friends," not a question mark.
- "that's" should be capitalized.
- Technically, "internet" should be capitalized, but I'll let that one pass.
- Could use a comma after "all day".
- Should have a period after "know".
Oh, and by the way: How do you know he is on the internet all day? Or was that another attempt at sarcasm?
Ok, I'm done.