
12-01-2002, 07:13 PM
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Ex-Graal Global
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Join Date: Oct 2001
Location: England
Posts: 10,892
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Outside Level -
Path:
Well this is ok, but its get boring after a few seconds due to the mass of greyness!
The stakes make it look horrible as you see water goes straight to grass, try and use the other stake more to the left, one without the bottom to it.
Detail:
Water, dirt path, and trees are fine, but everything else isnt that nice. The grass detail seems to be a right clicker which is horrible. And also there isn't enough dark green in the grass detail, and the other path looks out of place.
Sparks Rating: 5/10
-Sorry for a low score, but the grass and paths let you down.
Inside Level -
Shape:
This is nice, but the tile errors in the bush looks horrible.
Floor:
This is great really nice, brilliant use of tiles for a floor, brings lots of color and intrest to the level!
Problems:
-Door at top (Looks Weird)
-That brown roof (Can see grass)
-Castle tiles at top (Looks boring compared to bottom)
Sparks Rating: 8/10
-Just a few things to make better. |
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